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kinda of a long intro.. but the beat is tight, has a real nice laid back fill.. i think the delivery would sound better (in my opinion) if instead of the "aggressive" presence to have a more of a laid back, story telling type vibe.. but this is sick.. i liked the flow.. it was tight, the 2nd verse i guess you would call it is way nice... i def like seeing and hearing your drops man.. keep it going

Sup Deciple thnx for the feed man....Yea I agree man the intro is supa long, kinda deterred me from writing to it, but the person I collab with wanted the beat...I probably didn't make it clear but there are two different people on the track...I-M-E on the first verse and Im on the second, but thnx for the listen and glad u enjoyed it man

I actually really liked this song. Both of you were good rappers and I don't really have anything to complain about, the song had a great vibe to it. I think I liked your verse more because you had a more unique delivery. Keep it up.

Thnx Sentus appreciate the feed and listen man, I know the tracks a lil long too so Im glad you stuck it all the way through...

yeah intros a bit long haha.... but first verse was pretty sick actually.... loved the dubs on it... and how it was mixed.... very well done.... second verse very nice!!! again mixed very well.... good shit guys.... keep collabin and droppin....

cool samples up in the intro...but yeah i agree a lil long

beat sounds crazy as hell...pretty groovy tho..

first verse..pretty nice..ya quality is always good imo..likin da mixx...

2nd Verse...sik delivz hella strong..good shyt...

ummm okay this beat is gettin a lil tooo crazy...hahaha

hmmmm all in all i liked it..bro sounds like some jazzy Groovy shit ..beat actually sounds like its got a real drummer in it too...good stuff bro..1

glad u were feeln the song man, the intro was lil too long, but i thought the beat was quality too...thnx for listen and I rtf'd on ur track

Livenlearn wrote:glad u were feeln the song man, the intro was lil too long, but i thought the beat was quality too...thnx for listen and I rtf'd on ur track

and yes sir thank you for the honest feed..the thing about the beat is more of a preference ..it def was a change up from what im used to..but i will admit it BANGS pretty nicely...just towards the 2nd verse it gets a lil busy is all..still dope tho..like i said in my last post...1

Thnx for the listen man, we should def. do a track together if ur interested....I have a cypher track I need ppl to rap on so if ur interested just hit me back and when I finish mixin it Ill send it over to you...