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This will be a 10bar punchline battle, whomever brings through the best punchlines according to the viewers votes shall be termed the winner...First to 5 votes,(3-0)win (4-1)k.o

battle verses should be posted in 24hrs frm post, that is 5am c.a.t on the 3rd august!

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catergories

punches
multis
nameplay/wordplay



check in lol

punches punches and more punches

-- Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:34 pm --

something like this...
i fuck you off coz u wearin a skirt...rody piper
and make u spit dumb shit haha... in your potty diaper

uhh drop 10 total bars at one time...smh
going back and forth bar for bar will last a month here

Thats what i meant!...Ready when u are

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ok ill drop tonight or tomorrow

-- Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:27 pm --


Sentinel

welcome to illest!

welcome to illest!


let me give u a typical example -

I'm the epitome of rhythm-and-rhyme, so Ill be killin this illiterate-slime...
witness-as-i put this bitch-in-decline, before he's ever even written-a-line!!
my flow sick so quick he wouldnt even get-it-in-time he a slow-novice!
Im so-honest no-pauses no-commas like empty words he shows no-promise!!
fist aint pumpin but u still feel punchin, he knows my flows got his female-suckin..
A. R. V-fails-nothin, and im prompt to have "SENT OUT" like my Email-functions!
he cant touch this, he dont rock a chain, lol fag thats a pendant-and-locket
cant pretend-to-be-glocked-when you aint worth shit ill put sent/cent-in-a-pocket
you got a mac 10-and-u-cock-it? nahh your newcomer hype's-all-played,
styles-all-gay, picture my drops "cover up sent/scent" like i lysol-sprayed!
Punches-blazin my every puns-amazin, U'd rather run from me than run-from-Jason
cuz u can't win!! Ill give SENT-AN-L like your damn name's pronunciation!!
ur drops are like a country-station.. fuckin boring dude you need much-improvement!
Get smacked! and If you say im wack...at allllll, dude you cant fuckin-prove-it!!
i did this for amusement, not a dire-decision, but since its fire-im-spittin,
they can easily judge i make 'sen'-tence/tense like a trial-in-prison!!
u already died-so-just-listen..its over,just give urself a high five-n-applaud,
I feel no emotions but "sent-a-mental" for even trying-at-all!!



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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tha-d ... 23385.html

thanks for the welcome and all but uh...

you just another dead rapper, so anythng i say bout you is a metaphor,
i say so coz im like freddy and your dreams left you for me-to-claw,
you say you got flow but like a perennial river i just dam you,
i just get to make you choke and you woulnt even have a damn clue,
im 16 steps ahead and every bar you write gets you one behind,
spitting those whack rhymes is what you are so i bet you got a bee mind
so dont spit dont write and maybe,just maybe like a carebear i be-kind,
next time,if there will be i be sure to cut yo tongue out like samurai x
straighten and solve you like a problem in maths and show-you-my x
by now i got you breaking yo keyboard,but uh...could you borrow me your face? coz my ass z on vacation

dude.. thats 10 lines...thats not 10 bars, i clearly explained on the pm and even on here lol smh idk what the mods want to do with this now..

thats 10 bars depending on the speed at which i rap

-- Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:02 am --

All u need to do is ask the admin.... if you can redit your shit, by adding more 10lines...
They said there 1bar on here is 2lines

But when writing a rap verse we all know
that 1bar = 1line
even though inner rhymes are incorporated
as long as the words or syllables that end the lines rhyme.

Well IDK what's gonna go down with that but I will vote anyways...

Arv wins this.... why u ask....

well lets start by saying I didn't discredit sents verse based on his lack of bars... although I should have because it seems he knew he was short... but most of ur bars were long and mostly filler then u placed a short simple eh punch at the end...

And arv you didn't drop ur normal heat but it was enough to beat out sent with word/nameplay alone...

im not explaining this...

arv..cat sweep

not a bad battle.
punches-arvincible
multis-arvincible
nameplay/wordplay-arvincible
body bag!
MVGT arvincible

lol @ body bag