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The whole game changed it took a different route
it's easier to conceal your heart then to get it out
I guess that's what pimpin's bout, swagged up...limp it out
kept the biscuit round, all my dogs is in position now
talking bout living proud, jail cells, wirings, pitching mounds
the whole crowd cheers for the underdog and his crew
I guess that's just how it works, and all we ever been into
when you mention views things start getting a little too preachy
now how do you see me, based on observation maybe you see weed
you see cheap, you see a spoiled little brat, or you see weak
look in the mirror, you be me, I be you, we'll see whose healthy, pure...
we could have this discussion night and day but I know Al' B Sure
corrective manner, delective platter, with my whole sentence scattered
tryna correct my faulty passion that more then often left me battered
but my heart alone can accept these planners, destiny, fate, and bless me rapture
so I kept a level head intact, and thought to myself it'll be alright
one step away from telling y'all that this game will be all mine

nice shit man flow was crazy tight.. digging the rhyme scheme and jump off rhymes.. multis on point.. like the pitcher on the mound shit good stuff.. great to see ya dropping shit man

thanx for reading bro

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this was really great i loved it, nice flow, multis and concept

my fav lines;
now how do you see me, based on observation maybe you see weed
you see cheap, you see a spoiled little brat, or you see weak
look in the mirror, you be me, I be you, we'll see whose healthy, pure...

That Was really good no complaints from me. great job

Yo man this was tight. Seemed to be well thought out and you had some sick ass lines in here to go with that flow. Enjoyed the read.

thank you my friends

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This was tight.... man
flow was on point, good use of words
keep @ it man.