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Staring at a river...
at the same place I stood last year...
Watching you on the other side...
sitting there perfect...
on cement stairs, in the plaza square...
a beautiful brown jacket..
perfect glowing face...
reading "Atlas Shrugged"...
I come out the taxi cab...
behind myself..
wishing I was anyone else...

No amount of money...
smiles..
games..
climbing mountains...
changes that image...
seared into my memory...
forever...

Why did I keep talking...
when there was nothing left to say..
dropping tears of the impossible...
into that river...

Time makes everything so clear...

The flow and the shortness of the bars give this a unique touch.

im a fan of this style...just messages..short and crisp with a flow.

it was pretty goood poetry wise, reminds me more of spoken word or haiku, i tend to always make my poems rhyme, i guess its just habit but, this was pretty good and i can relate to the story freal

Very Vivid Short But A Great Read Good Job'

beautiful man, self reflection is good shit! always makes for a great poem and that is what you pulled off here, I really liked it! wish you would write more poetry my friend.