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M33Kish wrote:Hi,
My name is Revolution.

Making quick work of a walk to remember on an island of embers.../
I've been gone since December yet the ash is still fresh on the timber/
My pocket is heavy from the letter reading "return to sender"/
Tenderly writtin with the slender slur that only my mother could render/
hmm so far not exactly sure where this is going but rhymes is decent flow decent. but still lil ruff

The wind whimpers in my limp ear, but I can still hear the tears fall/
Sweat simmers above my left brow as I anticipate the result of a rolecall/
The night creeps silently, blooming from the cracked streets core/
Greeting me as I weep my native country I've fought so hard to die for/
I came from a reason for being, to just wanting more/
The glory of leading my brothers to different shores was an outcome I hadn't thought of before.../
I fix my posture amidst the roar of the copters soaring above me/
The deafening throttle of their engines rumbling the crown set before me/
According to the history books, this will be the fall of a nation/
But in truth, this is my first step on the road of world domination/

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Arvincible wrote:Rage, at the early stage of wrath, makes its path and way within me
Drained...im Feelin empty, Manifested from the pain, greed and envy
I used to keep it steady..
had kicks and the dopest shades where I now keep smoke grenades
and ropes and blades that i use to attack hotels and choke the maids
lol liked the rhyme scheme there at the last two lines. good imagery so far

give the ho a fade while the blood and tears soak her braids..
Its all a joke i play, stalk em home and watch em unaware,
undress and shower they dont catch my stare, until i snatch their hair..
naked bare, they scream but the duct tape-solves-that..
I love the rush i get when i knock em with a baseball-bat
diggin this part, the "rush" gave good imagery of a couple movies that remind me of this. good flow too

have their face fall flat, the pussy's great when its ripped-open!!
and head from a chick-chokin?! i cant get enough of leaving a bitch-broken!
Dominance, i get thrills from the adrenaline rushed down-my-spine
We all have a similar obsession, I just make a reality out-of-mine ..>:D
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