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INFINITE I RETIRES
TRUE VETERANZ STAYS WIRED

I NEVER SWEAT THA TECHNIQUE

( MEANING-a practical method or art applied to some particular task
skillfulness in the command of fundamentals )

I STAY EQUIPTED MULTI-TASKING ANY ELEMENTZ
SOME SAYS IM JUDIEST
BUT IM KNOWN TO SLAY WAR ELEPHATZ

ELEPHATZ SO-CALL MCEEZ
WHO TRIES TO SPIT INTELLIGENTLY

I WAS BORN THIRD FROM THA SUN
MY SCRIPTURES SHOULD BE WRITTEN IN THA HOLY QU’AN

WHO SAYS THEY’RE DROPPIN BOMBZ
I SPITZ RATICAL HELL EXPLODING LUNGZ

I’M THA BEST WHOEVER CARRIED IT
I BATTLED EVERY MCEE WHO CLAIMS THA CHARIOT

STAYING MENECE TO THIZ SOCIETY
FATALITY TO THOSE WHO WISHED AND TRIED ME.

THIZ IS JUST A TASTE OF WHAT I BECOME
Cata’ HELL BORN SON OF BABYLON

nice man good flow.. short as fuck tho.. liked it man good lil drop.. had some potential for sure.. a lot better structuring than most your pieces..

and hey feed shit man.. its a feed to drop kinda site doogle

Defiance, thats a trophy coming from you!
i really do appreciate tha props, i was tired as hell this morning, i had to drop a few lines woke up passedout on the keys..lol

this was a nice drop...I was feeling it, but was very short man, could've provided more, there's still room for improvement, possibly vocab to bolster your bars, but keep at it..
Peace

see.. This was better than your other drops, flow is there

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thanks to all

hey catastrophic, can u check out my writtens plz?

Diggn this first few bars the most. It was cut a little short. Didnt quite get to feel ur style enough. I'll be looking out for more of you. good drop tho.
KEEP WRITING!


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