Hip Hop Forum

whos tha ginger tella
whos Prince so called Dark alpha

Prince of Darkness
must i say a pardon me

dont lie b4 ya fry
you read my linez stop hate'in
you felt my vibe
you loved tha way it tickled ya' mind

i bet you ask wheres tha punch linez
it was there' flaming fried away ya inclined

hell with big wordz used
just turn me up and throw up the duece

betta yet hate me thats what you're good at
throw my rhymez in a sack
because their contagious like crack

gotcha doubting yourself
you're scared to battle me
without a ref

or will the chalkboard do ya battlez
boy' you're like a rattlesnake without it rattlez

ok look, I don't ever hate on anyone unless it's deserved. So when I give you feedback it's to help you. Realise that most people suck at the beginning but elevate to achieve perfection. On that note, your rhymes are too basic, anybody can make a buncha lines that rhyme, you need to come with some concepts and schemes for your writing, put more effort and thinking into it, start there.

And if you want ta battle...... Feel welcomed to set one up

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yes ...it no disrepect..
a battle would be nice..havent had not one since i join. ok i set one up.