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6 bars
house rules(however yall do voting on this site works for me)
Due date: Saturday before midnight

consider this a check in.

this is my check good luck lilbruh

-- Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:08 pm --

welcome-to-the-site,lemme show you the ropes,its not a joke,
u choke so much,i never see u talk,mimes have better audios than u,above or below chalk
my scriptures are tortures,you could be broke,a few on here could smash ur Brain
i torch-herbs like shazo theres an O - Z in that,so most of us already smoked Half ur name,
we'll just forget about it! like the time you thought you had a good rhyme,
me killing u never happened,what struggle?ur more spoiled than Hamptons in Manhattan,
what brings you here,on your device,no lie this is actually entertaining your mind
you winning is more uncertain than how long your body will be remaining in time,
your more lame than displayin-lassos,im not a faggit,so you know im hatin-shazo,
i Light UP a JAY,drop the ROC on your face,and leave you blacker than JAZO
im coaching a bitch,im similar to trish stratus,they rather see my shit than his,
shazo! my dick was in yo mom,fuck it,now your more my kid than his....


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/never ... ml#p177846

May bad time got away droppin.

Im john wayne wit the aim every shot i take hittin
If im tossin clips im puttin 32 to his chest..blake griffin
If i throw punfhes im droppin you this kid is not an obstacle
Ill son and beat this clown and really leave him in the childrens hospital
If hes downs how can he stand to me, this mans a beast
I damage geeks, play your part or you can die on your set like brandon lee
You cannot win. Leave his mind and body delocated when these shots send
Put that eagle to his heart,if its after 9pm toss em in the lake see if this adult swim
Humble and pummel you throw in a ric flair chop and a stonecold stunner too
Itll take more than a dictionary and forced multis to pullbout the W

Sorry for the lateness and quality.. and line length its a hassle tryna get this done on the phone.. good shit tho blake

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-- Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:22 am --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/88sky ... 23368.html

HMMM...

Flow; shaz
multies; shaz
punches; ... shaz
personals: blake? not really many in either verse
enjoyment; shaz i guess
creativity;: shaz

mvgt shaz for the cat sweep

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I dont know, I think Blake took this one to be honest. They both came nicely, had some nice punchlines, but blake just made his seem better aimed at Shazo. I think everything but one line from shazo can be aimed at anyone. Blake had some nice wording as well, once i understood this reference, i knew id vote for blake.

i torch-herbs like shazo theres an O - Z in that,so most of us already smoked Half ur name

Pretty cool read from both, but MVGT BlakeDowns

BlakeDowns wrote:this is my check good luck lilbruh

-- Sun Jul 24, 2011 5:08 pm --

welcome-to-the-site,lemme show you the ropes,its not a joke,
u choke so much,i never see u talk,mimes have better audios than u,above or below chalk
kinda seem too long but the rhymes was aite, the structure etc could be cleaner

my scriptures are tortures,you could be broke,a few on here could smash ur Brain
i torch-herbs like shazo theres an O - Z in that,so most of us already smoked Half ur name,
haha ok i liked that

we'll just forget about it! like the time you thought you had a good rhyme,
me killing u never happened,what struggle?ur more spoiled than Hamptons in Manhattan,
what brings you here,on your device,no lie this is actually entertaining your mind
you winning is more uncertain than how long your body will be remaining in time,
still no real punchs except for the oz line, rhymes are good but still needs more hits at the dude

your more lame than displayin-lassos,im not a faggit,so you know im hatin-shazo,
i Light UP a JAY,drop the ROC on your face,and leave you blacker than JAZO
im coaching a bitch,im similar to trish stratus,they rather see my shit than his,
shazo! my dick was in yo mom,fuck it,now your more my kid than his....
idk kinda fell of towards the end, if you had stuck with the stuff like the oz line then it could have been better, but rhymes were up in down in some parts.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/never ... ml#p177846

-- Sat Jul 30, 2011 9:37 am --

Shazo wrote:May bad time got away droppin.

Im john wayne wit the aim every shot i take hittin
If im tossin clips im puttin 32 to his chest..blake griffin
aiite

If i throw punfhes im droppin you this kid is not an obstacle
Ill son and beat this clown and really leave him in the childrens hospital
cute, but doesnt hit hard
If hes downs how can he stand to me, this mans a beast
I damage geeks, play your part or you can die on your set like brandon lee
aite lee line was coo

You cannot win. Leave his mind and body delocated when these shots send
Put that eagle to his heart,if its after 9pm toss em in the lake see if this adult swim
pretty str8 you got setups and punchs at least
Humble and pummel you throw in a ric flair chop and a stonecold stunner too
Itll take more than a dictionary and forced multis to pullbout the W
an aite closer
Sorry for the lateness and quality.. and line length its a hassle tryna get this done on the phone.. good shit tho blake

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-- Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:22 am --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/88sky ... 23368.html

vote=shazo, just had more punchs and setups were cleaner,
better flow and was bit smoother. good battle

"32's on the chest...Blake Griffin"

My personal favorite, but the rest of your drop kept the pace. I like both cats, and honestly the categories were close with arguments that can be made for both but Shaz took this one for me.

BLAKE:

welcome-to-the-site,lemme show you the ropes,its not a joke,
u choke so much,i never see u talk,mimes have better audios than u,above or below chalk

NOPE

my scriptures are tortures,you could be broke,a few on here could smash ur Brain
i torch-herbs like shazo theres an O - Z in that,so most of us already smoked Half ur name,

NO.

we'll just forget about it! like the time you thought you had a good rhyme,
me killing u never happened,what struggle?ur more spoiled than Hamptons in Manhattan,

HUH?

what brings you here,on your device,no lie this is actually entertaining your mind
you winning is more uncertain than how long your body will be remaining in time,

NO.

your more lame than displayin-lassos,im not a faggit,so you know im hatin-shazo,
i Light UP a JAY,drop the ROC on your face,and leave you blacker than JAZO

POOP.

im coaching a bitch,im similar to trish stratus,they rather see my shit than his,
shazo! my dick was in yo mom,fuck it,now your more my kid than his....

STOP WRITING







SHAZO:

Im john wayne wit the aim every shot i take hittin
If im tossin clips im puttin 32 to his chest..blake griffin

NOT BAD. PLAYED CONCEPT

If i throw punfhes im droppin you this kid is not an obstacle
Ill son and beat this clown and really leave him in the childrens hospital

KINDA FUNNY

If hes downs how can he stand to me, this mans a beast
I damage geeks, play your part or you can die on your set like brandon lee

NOT BAD

You cannot win. Leave his mind and body delocated when these shots send
Put that eagle to his heart,if its after 9pm toss em in the lake see if this adult swim

KINDA FUNNY

Humble and pummel you throw in a ric flair chop and a stonecold stunner too
Itll take more than a dictionary and forced multis to pullbout the W

EHH



VOTE: SHAZO
BETTER PUNCHES, MULTIS N FLOW, CAT SWEEP
WHOEVER VOTED FOR BLAKE NEEDS TO KILL THEMSELF ASAP!

u choke so much,i never see u talk,mimes have better audios than u,above or below chalk

very weak and choppy

i torch-herbs like shazo theres an O - Z in that,so most of us already smoked Half ur name,

I respect the concept but it seems forced and again disrupts the rhythym

Overall you had some decent concepts but for me the flow was to choppy I suggest you try to keep it simple and don't change how many syllables between your rhyme so often, considering people will be reading it with diff rhythm...

Im john wayne wit the aim every shot i take hittin
If im tossin clips im puttin 32 to his chest..blake griffin

Started off with a nice flow

If hes downs how can he stand to me, this mans a beast
I damage geeks, play your part or you can die on your set like brandon lee

Probably my fav line from the battle, wouldn't be suprised if some cats on here don't know about Crow...

My vote....SHAZO

Shazo wins