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Topic picked by M33Kish

"A day in the life of a stalker"

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I'll post my two vote links with my verse... Check.

Alright then, let have at it. I'll post my links with my drop. Check.

-- Wed Jul 20, 2011 6:46 am --

out of my peripheral I peep my victim sitting at the bar on (baron) the end her (enders) company weak as the punch drink she's steadily nursing//the poison coursing, loser cursing under his breath, it's no contest, even trying his best he can't reach the breast, so I confess-

Like an usher slowly making my way, at least in fantasy, instead I scope the scene//she's slurping that promethazine, dreams of losing liquid soldiers cumin into being, it's her I fiend and now the head slowly nodding-

Forget the probing and prodding, I sweep and scoop this kitty litter, shitfaced, just one night and taste and then I'll quickly quit her//But first it's time to deliver, been scoping shawty for some time, retracing steps and every line, so I know just how to find, this piece of mine (peace of mind)-

Seeking sanctum in her warm embrace but always distanced, hiding in the seams it would seem that while close I always missed it//Found a strand in a lock-must have got caught, placed it with the rest that I copped, some say I should stop, but the thrill of the chase surrounds me and feeling her face confounds me-

I quickly awake from dreams of sorrow and lust, degraded disgust, disillusioned from contusions of the elusive slut and yet I must//simply shake away the fiends I harbor and trust, belated enough, no longer waiting it's time, no more debating-

The dime already left the quarterback at the bar, stumbled to the car, down the boulevard, stopped at the park//it wasn't too far, but certainly dark, carton to match it was a spark, brought fire eager to indulge in nights desires

Ripped the denim then the vickies, left the secrets for the feds to find, already gloved up, not a print or prince thats left behind//she's fit and fine, like the female lead in swordfish, and better still she's mine, since I peeped the dime, I knew I need to wait my time

And so I let this monster ball play out with my jimmy johnson, slowly start to wake, asphyxiate and then i hear the swansong//dig the tomb in dedication, as I place her in the basement, now attentions are too vacant, gotta find a new replacement...

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-- Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:58 am --

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Jayzon I respect your verse but this one belongs to Baron Enders. His flow made it a more enjoyable read, and his content came gave a deeper story impact.

Vote: Baron Enders

Baron had a better overall verse he painted a better picture.. while maintaining flow... I also like the way he came at the topic... very creative..

Vote... baron

The flow, creativity, and just the way it was laid out got this one for me, honestly. Jay, you didnt do bad or anything, but try thinking outside of the box a little more. Nothing else to say really, I give all cats to Baron.

Vote- Baron