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im leaving Ur Shadows-Severed,i disperse Flames beyond Leerois scriptures.......thats faker than Cattle-Leopards,
trying to win within my presence,youll see more disaster than the subliminals within your battle-record...
its not goin ya WAY you aint Carlito,when it comes to dicks,piss,and heroin you take more shots than niggas do for free-throws,
faggit fag leeroi,said he was the UNDENIABLE LAST DRAGON!how much more do we gotta know,to know that He-Blows...
remember that female you couldnt fuck,saying your a Clown Fart,than she raped me and made me a Smart-Skeet-Jar
go ahead try bring your whole crew,its not a DRAW,when i DOWN ART faster than a Starved-Retard
your girls pussy is what i bust-while-sparks lit,i said why do you Rap leeroi,nobody loves-the-Garbage
your levels more below,far from roofs,i walk,you get stepped on more than rugs-and-carpets
feed the shark,my buisness is deadlier than LEE's,wit more inStore im dispersing more bodies than Walmart,
saying you RAP Gangsta! but here Ur smoked like dope,and Ur trying to be a Cop more than Paul Blart
forget Ur fiending ya bitch,20 lines, go all out and hit ya heavy,
your timid-kid,tell me ya limited, as If I didnt know already....
deceased family members of yours,right-out-back,your moms gettin low on my pyramid,ill put UR Lights-out-Fag
tell that bitch Leeroi, i stay sitting on GREEN all day....... WHITE HOUSE SWAG!
your so betty,im tough,i got punches for days,
i could lay sum weight to your face... but theres already-enough......
this is a smart-hell,im making Leeroi factually-tear-his-parts-and-wealth,
you stay on ur knees,your serving ya boys from ART more than the Actual-Art itself,
you Crackhead you do more than touch-the-Rock,you BLOW only if its guys youd fuck-the-cops,
and as far as buisness,im shutting down LEES so much you woulda thought i was-the-boss,

Sorry I'm late I saw your callout and had to laugh it off
Like I care that splash involved its nothing I got cannon balls

This is a mis match splish ya shits trash
In quick fash I'll split splash like 5 on a 10 sack

It's absurd thinking green is an herb picture me getting burned
See, even in your imagination that's B in a URN

I'm kinda good with words so I don't know if you noticed B
Ya flow is weak and your name sorta reads Blake own in Ds

I couldn't duplicate this beating if I go and pound ten drums
It's like I'm Mr incredible and Downs Syndrome

It's Unfortunate how I torture kids but ya flow is pour as piss
Everyone I know and they mom could mop the floor with splish

You try to fit rhymes where they don't fit and then force em in
Forfeit bitch punches pfft sponge bob could absorb ya hits

I seen ya pic if you ever hit green I'd stop a splashking lung quick as a gattling gun
You only battle new dudes that's why the respect you gets exactly none

Yo its fuck you, clowns suck too and oh thee last thing
put question marks after ya bars cus you'll always be ASS king

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BLAKE:
im leaving Ur Shadows-Severed,i disperse Flames beyond Leerois scriptures.......thats faker than Cattle-Leopards,
trying to win within my presence,youll see more disaster than the subliminals within your battle-record...

STRETCHED BEYOND BELIEF.. DIDNT LIKE IT

its not goin ya WAY you aint Carlito,when it comes to dicks,piss,and heroin you take more shots than niggas do for free-throws,
faggit fag leeroi,said he was the UNDENIABLE LAST DRAGON!how much more do we gotta know,to know that He-Blows...

NO.

remember that female you couldnt fuck,saying your a Clown Fart,than she raped me and made me a Smart-Skeet-Jar
go ahead try bring your whole crew,its not a DRAW,when i DOWN ART faster than a Starved-Retard

LOL, THE PUNCH WAS FUNNY BUT UR MULTIS NEED WORK

your girls pussy is what i bust-while-sparks lit,i said why do you Rap leeroi,nobody loves-the-Garbage
your levels more below,far from roofs,i walk,you get stepped on more than rugs-and-carpets

PLAYED

feed the shark,my buisness is deadlier than LEE's,wit more inStore im dispersing more bodies than Walmart,
saying you RAP Gangsta! but here Ur smoked like dope,and Ur trying to be a Cop more than Paul Blart

DECENT ATTEMPT..

forget Ur fiending ya bitch,20 lines, go all out and hit ya heavy,
your timid-kid,tell me ya limited, as If I didnt know already....

NAH

deceased family members of yours,right-out-back,your moms gettin low on my pyramid,ill put UR Lights-out-Fag
tell that bitch Leeroi, i stay sitting on GREEN all day....... WHITE HOUSE SWAG!

HUH?

your so betty,im tough,i got punches for days,
i could lay sum weight to your face... but theres already-enough......
this is a smart-hell,im making Leeroi factually-tear-his-parts-and-wealth,
you stay on ur knees,your serving ya boys from ART more than the Actual-Art itself,

NOPE

you Crackhead you do more than touch-the-Rock,you BLOW only if its guys youd fuck-the-cops,
and as far as buisness,im shutting down LEES so much you woulda thought i was-the-boss,

DONT GET IT







LEE:
Sorry I'm late I saw your callout and had to laugh it off
Like I care that splash involved its nothing I got cannon balls

NO

This is a mis match splish ya shits trash
In quick fash I'll split splash like 5 on a 10 sack

EHH

It's absurd thinking green is an herb picture me getting burned
See, even in your imagination that's B in a URN

DECENT

I'm kinda good with words so I don't know if you noticed B
Ya flow is weak and your name sorta reads Blake own in Ds

NAH

I couldn't duplicate this beating if I go and pound ten drums
It's like I'm Mr incredible and Downs Syndrome

SHOULDA WORDED THIS BETTER

It's Unfortunate how I torture kids but ya flow is pour as piss
Everyone I know and they mom could mop the floor with splish

NAH

You try to fit rhymes where they don't fit and then force em in
Forfeit bitch punches pfft sponge bob could absorb ya hits

DECENT

I seen ya pic if you ever hit green I'd stop a splashking lung quick as a gattling gun
You only battle new dudes that's why the respect you gets exactly none

NAH

Yo its fuck you, clowns suck too and oh thee last thing
put question marks after ya bars cus you'll always be ASS king

WEAK



OVERALL THIS WAS A WEAK BATTLE, LEE, U CAME 23X HARDER IN OUR BATTLE.. BUT U HAD MUCH BETTER STRUCTURE/FLOW/MULTIS/ WHICH IS WHY IM VOTING FOR U

SPLASH, SHORTEN UR BARS IN HALF, AND REWORD UR PUNCHES. U HAVE DOPE CONCEPTS BUT NEED TO BE WORDED BETTER TO HIT HARDER.

VOTE: LEE

NO i dont have 100 posts obviously, so heres my vote anyhow to comply with the voting links...

Scotts a dick... Just saying.


Anyhow,

BlakeDowns, you did stretch quite a bit to be honest. Scott has a point lol. I think it's your wording, its rather rough, and doesnt always read like a rap should. It read at points more like a short story. I wasn't completely a fan of some of the things you were saying. The structure was all over the place, so it made the flow difficult to capture.

Leeroi Green, at this point you had my vote:

Forfeit bitch punches pfft sponge bob could absorb ya hits

Nice verse man.

MVGT Leeroi Green

Baron Enders wrote:Scotts a dick... Just saying.

hater.

multies: blake
flow: lg
punches:lg (consistancy)
personals: blake
enjoyment: lg
mvgt lg

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