Hip Hop Forum

i write script... from my finger tips to written language
trapping this pain an anguish in every scene thats painted
often words are tainted contained in common placement
its hip hop from the basement so grimy i can taste it
Sentences turn to paragraphs just to test your patience
they say that hip hops now laments so im here to save it
im working these grave shifts trying to turn a profit
electric i burn the sockets you judge an i'll adjourn the process
i kill these germs with comet turn tha page an learn the hotness
as these worms jus talk shit acting pristine in a septic tank
not swag im accepted dank stabbin game wit an electric shank
the eclectic tank spitting artillery from an armored shell
cant be contained or barred in cells im armed to harm your health
my cd swarmed when on a shelf so study the politics
im harder than all of this diamond game than i polished it
wackness? i will abolish it cause i will never stall or fall in pits
its in our common knowledges so why try when its still carving?
the ill arson with the real doctrine coming at the real problems
i feel awesome living life while you fools play dead you still possum
this is my concealed options as my words can fill or build coffins

Legit bro, smooth transitions and clean multies, keep at it my dude. Getting better and better.

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thanks man.. upping