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check. thanks for the battle man

-- Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:27 am --

48 hours is waaaaaay too long.

ok ok. AHEM..........



By the time this battles through, leeroi wont walk, even on BALL-FOUR. cus when i bust, ill leave this green with more holes than a GOLF-COARSE

You shoulda STOPPED-SHORT, tryna battle such a rookie is OVER-YA-HEAD. Imma smoke this green to ashes, till he's OVER-AND-DEAD.

or exPLODE-HIM-INSTEAD, leave little green smithereens everywhere. Your a bitch with no flow, while i have more current than electric chairs.

This is hardly fair, i swear, i thought first round would be a challenge. Im not a knight or even a warrior, and i jus killed the LAST DRAGON.



all pretty self explan.

1. his little saying on his profile says " the last dragon"

Listen Jr. I son kids be grateful I could be like wat kin?
Never claim you and say as proof I used a magnum if I busted

Dumb Shit I roast a vagrant so no complaining
The flow is blazing you get chewed up and snuffed like Copenhagen

Wouldn't matter if J.R. was brave heart I'd laugh at lame kids
Can't play ART like treARC just end up decapitated

I'll bruise you proper my punches got more kick than they use in soccer
And leaves beef flame broiled yeah I'm serving Jr whoppers

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By the time this battles through, leeroi wont walk, even on BALL-FOUR. cus when i bust, ill leave this green with more holes than a GOLF-COARSE
(this was a decent opener,nameplay,multies,)

You shoulda STOPPED-SHORT, tryna battle such a rookie is OVER-YA-HEAD. Imma smoke this green to ashes, till he's OVER-AND-DEAD.
(this was decent,nameplay,multies,punch)

or exPLODE-HIM-INSTEAD, leave little green smithereens everywhere. Your a bitch with no flow, while i have more current than electric chairs.
(this was okish)

This is hardly fair, i swear, i thought first round would be a challenge. Im not a knight or even a warrior, and i jus killed the LAST DRAGON.
(decent personal,not a bad ender,)


vs

Listen Jr. I son kids be grateful I could be like wat kin?
Never claim you and say as proof I used a magnum if I busted
(nice bar,decentmultiflow, decent nameplay,wordplay,punch)

Dumb Shit I roast a vagrant so no complaining
The flow is blazing you get chewed up and snuffed like Copenhagen
(this was tight,wordplay,ok flow,decent punch)

Wouldn't matter if J.R. was brave heart I'd laugh at lame kids
Can't play ART like treARC just end up decapitated
(this was decent wordplay,multies,punch)

I'll bruise you proper my punches got more kick than they use in soccer
And leaves beef flame broiled yeah I'm serving Jr whoppers
(decent finish,nameplay,punch,)

now Jr probably had the stronger firstbar,my advice to watkins is use more personals,wordplay,and clean your verse structure up,itll make it seem way better,but i think leeroi got the rest of the bars,there really wasnt anything personal except when jr brought up the shit in leeroi's sig,other than that this was an ok-battle,
MVGT leeroi

That was actually pretty Good for a First Battle. Alot of Potential.

Flow: Green
Punchlines: Watkins
Multies: Watkins
Personals: Green
Enjoyment: Green

Vote: Leeroi Green

I felt Leeroi mainly went personal, which isnt necessarily bad but coupled with Watkins Ball Four punchline I thought he had that category. The Problem for Watkins was he didnt get personal enough. Watkins kind of tailed off in the end and Green hit him with an Ok Jr. Whoppers punchline. All in all this will be a good Starting point for you JR Watkins. If you need help refining your skills I can help you with that. Good Luck to both of you.

Flow goes to leeroi
Punches, if looking at the battle in it's entirety, I feel is a tie
Personals go to leeroi, good attacks on the name
Multis go to leeroi, I felt he 2nd and 3rd bar outdid jr's
Wordplay would go to green for the same reason as stated above
Enjoyment goes to green , there was a more fluent and appealing verse, jr had some nice stuff but the punches didn't sting that hard, I feel your 3rd bar could be worded better to have a harder punch, n should be fully directed at the opponent

Ok battle, mvgt leeroi green

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This one was nice, because it showed promise. JR, you came with it the first bar, but I felt like the fire tailed off with the rest of the drop. Leeroi, I gotta ask you...what did he do to you? Personals throughout, the multi use and wordplay was on it. Punches hit without any misses. MVGT: Leeroi

leeroi in every cat except multies...

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