Hip Hop Forum

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FjiIC0EK8Gs

alright so this time here goes the song and theirs a video with it now..........just started doin this so lemme know what yal think, thanx
slicc

ummmmm ur verse not so great... second verse... mediocre... video.... terrible.... chorus so so... kind of annoying but good effort....

I liked the line about the depression and fixing the recession...but that was about it. The chorus was alright at best and while I'm not trying to hate or anything, the video was whack and the verses were weak. You said you are just starting this thing so I'm sure there is a learning curve and room to grow. Keep at it and work out one thing at a time.

I wanna see yal videos........see how yal do your shit

hmm i liked the production on this here video..imo.except in the end during the last hook where the video is in a different format ..throws it off...some of the video was a il cheesy tho...

i thought dude on the hook brought some fire tho..4 sure..
First Verse..tbh..that was not very hott..uhhm better mixxing and quality would help it alot..but even so ..uhh
kinda monotone imo..and the lyrics were lacking a bit in emotion and imagery imo..srry bro

Second Verse ..a lil better with the lyrics and deliv..but it might be cuz his mixxing sounds a tad bit cleaner...

wow..imo.this song would be hott if ya'll redid those verses...since yo went thru the trouble of makin this video..you might as well fixx the parts of the song that
are not gellin...

appreciate the feed famo....and the song old now i jus now did the video to it thats all