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Lets do it:
* 8 bars
* Due 24 after check in
* Categories include: punches, flow, personals, multies, enjoyment
* Anyone can vote
* Don't pull no punches, I'm here to grow and prove and the only way to get better is to come with it, live and learn.

Previous votes:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p176467
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/post1 ... ml#p176305

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yeep

Bomb first, I hope you swinging, cant be hiding in this bout
Your girl was teaming when ya boy was landsliding in her mouth
(lance lyde and his first battle: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lance ... 23082.html )

Panda calls you lancelot, but we'll get to it later
Said used to be a fucking dick sucking demonstrator
(K Panda when talking to lance in Help forum: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/help-vt23045.html)

Got damn your lyrics weak with no particular answer
Kinda tough to bring the heat with ya testicular cancer
(lance...armstrong http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lance_Armstrong)

Check the history, like ya pops ya ass should be banned
Your chance at winning less than Bass getting back in the band
(lancelot history http://www.pantheon.org/articles/l/lancelot.html and lance...basshttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lance_Bass)

Like two kids in the sand, your strictly viral
I'll you give you a chance to go and call out your denial
(two kids in a sandboxhttp://kids-in-sandbox.com/)

Aint no comeback, this aint the cardinals and you aint Berkman
Saying any death with eyes open is deserved man
(lance...berkmanhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lance_Berkman)

So here's what you deserve for stepping up to bat
Pitches from the luger just might slug ya if you handle that

Right to the medula you a fool, time to school ya
Oh, I fucked ya daughter too, wasn't hard at all to pull her.

My brain nearly died fromreading each gay shit line
said you've been cyphering, go back there so we dnt have to waste our time
each verse looking like ur trying to quit, im sure this guy is a bitch
your skills like how often people vote on this site.......literally dieing and shit
dude couldnt tella dick from a vagina, I hope u rott and die
and how can black spot, the difference? when his eyes block his sight
a gun and a knife are, how u die u bum of a writer
cus im gonna have 'the last word' in this battle, you know like one of ur cyphers
are ufrom a faggot hook up site? u shld start heading back
i watched a movie in my crib, he hires a plumber to get some men in black
a wannabe homofag, you wont be able to move when ur killed yo
and its no wonder jason gets slept on when hes actually named after a pillow
ur chicks slappin my pole, so in this life ur lacking a role
and now he found out....were about to watch blackberry himself back in his hole
last pocket and ur snookered, you're about to tuck this loss you fuckin' jock
he's on the blackball....from how much his boy sucks his cock

gd luck

Bomb first, I hope you swinging, cant be hiding in this bout
Your girl was teaming when ya boy was landsliding in her mouth
(this didnt connect,made no sense and i was in that battle,maybe im wrong :/

Panda calls you lancelot, but we'll get to it later
Said used to be a fucking dick sucking demonstrator
(this was kinda weak,,horrible visuals!

Got damn your lyrics weak with no particular answer
Kinda tough to bring the heat with ya testicular cancer
(nameplay was basic,this was at best an average simple bar)

Check the history, like ya pops ya ass should be banned
Your chance at winning less than Bass getting back in the band
(this wasnt strong,but i mean are the chance really that slim,who cares anyways wtf on this gay shit)


Like two kids in the sand, your strictly viral
I'll you give you a chance to go and call out your denial
(ok-ish)

Aint no comeback, this aint the cardinals and you aint Berkman
Saying any death with eyes open is deserved man
(wtf..no...i wasnt feeling,)

So here's what you deserve for stepping up to bat
Pitches from the luger just might slug ya if you handle that
(ok wordplay,ok bar)

Right to the medula you a fool, time to school ya
Oh, I fucked ya daughter too, wasn't hard at all to pull her.
(school ya ,pull her does not rhyme quit it with the anti-flow shit,but ok bar btw)

vs

My brain nearly died fromreading each gay shit line
said you've been cyphering, go back there so we dnt have to waste our time
(decent personal,decent punch,opener)

each verse looking like ur trying to quit, this guy is a bitch
your skills like how often people vote on this site.......literally dieing and shit
(true story,ok multies,voting is inactive at times,not a weak punch here)

dude couldnt tella dick from a vagina, I hope u rott and die
and how can black spot, the difference? when his eyes block his sight
(ok multies,decent nameplay,okish punch)

a gun and a knife are, how u die u bum of a writer
cus im gonna have 'the last word' in this battle, you know like one of ur cyphers
(this was one of your weaker bars,you started falling off here to me i just wasnt feeling this)

are ufrom a faggot hook up site? u shld start heading back
i watched a movie in my crib, he hires a plumber to get some men in black
(weird one,try to cut down on the gay shit,ight wordplay,the punch was ight,)

a wannabe homofag, you wont be able to move when ur killed yo
and its no wonder jason gets slept on when hes actually named after a pillow
(this was nice,good nameplay,decent punch)

ur chicks slappin my pole, so in this life ur lacking a role
and now he found out....were about to watch blackberry himself back in his hole
(okish nameplay,good multies,decent punch)

last pocket and ur snookered, you're about to tuck this loss you fuckin' jock
he's on the blackball....from how much his boy sucks his cock
(wtf wasnt feeling,this gay visions ruin shit!!! stop it!! not a solid ender,seemed weak!!)

this battle wasnt one of the most entertaining too much homosexual material literally,just quit it and replace all that with personals or multies just something else, i know im not the only one noticing this shit its annoying,but Lance had better Multies,wordplay,nameplay and punches,more consistency so he gets my vote,
MVGT - lancelyde

JAYZON:
Bomb first, I hope you swinging, cant be hiding in this bout
Your girl was teaming when ya boy was landsliding in her mouth
(lance lyde and his first battle: lance-blakedowns-vt23082.html )

NO.

Panda calls you lancelot, but we'll get to it later
Said used to be a fucking dick sucking demonstrator
(K Panda when talking to lance in Help forum: help-vt23045.html)

NO.

Got damn your lyrics weak with no particular answer
Kinda tough to bring the heat with ya testicular cancer
(lance...armstrong http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lance_Armstrong)

NO.

Check the history, like ya pops ya ass should be banned
Your chance at winning less than Bass getting back in the band
(lancelot history http://www.pantheon.org/articles/l/lancelot.html and lance...basshttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lance_Bass)

NOPE.

Like two kids in the sand, your strictly viral
I'll you give you a chance to go and call out your denial
(two kids in a sandboxhttp://kids-in-sandbox.com/)

BIG NO.

Aint no comeback, this aint the cardinals and you aint Berkman
Saying any death with eyes open is deserved man
(lance...berkmanhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lance_Berkman)

FUCK NO.

So here's what you deserve for stepping up to bat
Pitches from the luger just might slug ya if you handle that

SHIT NO.

Right to the medula you a fool, time to school ya
Oh, I fucked ya daughter too, wasn't hard at all to pull her.

SCHOOL YA? PULL HER? DONT RHYME. HELL NO.








LANCE:
My brain nearly died fromreading each gay shit line
said you've been cyphering, go back there so we dnt have to waste our time

NO.

each verse looking like ur trying to quit, im sure this guy is a bitch
your skills like how often people vote on this site.......literally dieing and shit

YOUVE BARELY BEEN HERE.. HOW DO U KNOW HOW OFTEN BATTLES GET VOTED ON?!

dude couldnt tella dick from a vagina, I hope u rott and die
and how can black spot, the difference? when his eyes block his sight

NO.

a gun and a knife are, how u die u bum of a writer
cus im gonna have 'the last word' in this battle, you know like one of ur cyphers

BETTER

are ufrom a faggot hook up site? u shld start heading back
i watched a movie in my crib, he hires a plumber to get some men in black

NO.

a wannabe homofag, you wont be able to move when ur killed yo
and its no wonder jason gets slept on when hes actually named after a pillow

EH, GOOD TRY..

ur chicks slappin my pole, so in this life ur lacking a role
and now he found out....were about to watch blackberry himself back in his hole

CHRIST NO.

last pocket and ur snookered, you're about to tuck this loss you fuckin' jock
he's on the blackball....from how much his boy sucks his cock

JESUS NO.

THIS BATTLE WASNT GOOD. BOTH HAD SHITTY PUNCHES N WORDPLAY.. LACE HAD BETTER MULTIS AND TRIED HARDER IMO. HIS PUNCHES AT LEAST SORTA MADE SENSE.

VOTE: LANCE

^^ I disagree... not with the outcome... but with who tried harder.... I think that jays problem was he tried too hard lol... he somehow manages to over write basic bars.... then over explains them to boot..... I wasn't feeling any of his punches... and he rhyme scheme was super simple...

I wasn't Feeling many of lances punches either but a few of them connected somewhat so...

Mvgt lance

Thank you all for the commentary and for those who left feedback, it's appreciated. I can take a loss with some learning like the bbq.