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Yes, I could hear this over a Mac Miller instrumental. I advise that you use some multi's and revise it a little bit, but that's just me. Just do you.

iight thanks ill revise it right noww

I ain't trying to hate on u but that reminds me of some lil Wayne type shit n I despise lil wayne. You need to add more substance to your rhymes to liven them up. Pick a topic cus ppl r bored with hearin about a dudes swag n their doe etc. Throw in some metas wordplay n punchlines n ull have a decent drop. Just b original n stay true to yourself. I know this was a free but even frees need to have at least some attempts at wordplay etc.

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Hey man, I appreciate you doing ya thing. Check the forums dude. You might get more incite on how to better revise your drops. Although this was FAIR, I think there's a lot more potential in you. Try to rap about a topic that isn't generic.

elevation would suite you.. really basic no real direction.. but keep on writing and youll get better

Meh do you man, this is whats popping off, if you want to go underground you can add alot more substance to the drops, but as far as popular rap goes this is tight.