Hellmatic (Prod. By Nemesis)

[Audible Thought]

http://snd.sc/kYXStD

Original track by me, produced by the homie nemesis check em out on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/nemisis732


or with lyrics:

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPg0eJM3Aas[/video]


tell me what ya think!

[Livenlearn]

The beat was real clean, liked the sample and the instruments, pretty good piece there..The lyrics of the song were very good, created nice imagery and told the story well, the only thing I would work on is the delivery though the lyrics told the story I couldnt feel the story and thus it didnt relate as well as it could...in a few areas more in the second verse u were a lil monotone otherwise, it was a good piece nice drop man

[Loon E Lou]

this beat is cold as hell man. ANY nas sample on your track is ill haha. you come in a little iffy, but then jump on and get it goin nicely. you have a real nice style man. your delivery seems very comfortable, which really makes or breaks shit. you come with nice little schemes as well as some above par vocab. you ride the beat well. no falls offs as far as i can hear. only thing i can prolly mention for any type of improvement, is maybe a liiiiiittle more emotion on some parts of your verse to really draw the listener into what you're feeling and trying to get accross. all in all tho man, nice mixtape track. i look forward to our upcoming projects man.