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24 Hour Deadline

Cats

Flow
Punches
Multies
Wordplay

Anything else?

This is my check, good luck

Need 50 posts to vote, 6 Bars...Cool

....Check

I'll Prove I'm Bigger Than This Antic, "Mean" No Triggers Like Savage
My "Mode" Of Killing To Work A Number On'em, I Figure That You Average!

A Killer With A Madness, My Bars Hone, And The Scarred Tones Get You..
I Leave You Mangled With Pieces Hanging Down..Like A Star Jones Special!

Choose Your Weaponary I'll Chew This Noob With Stew & Ecstacy
Brewed Intensively To Fuel A Fued Screwed In Ruthless Recipe

Your Bitch Made, The Switch Blade Thrown Each Way To Fool A Lesser G
Get Played And Encaved When He Reads His Name It's Just Addressing Me (OMG)

I'll Take This 'St' With '33z' Just A Paper Weight With Keys
Who Can't Take Away His Fate Today When I Grate His Face With Knee's

This Disgrace That Faces Me, Passes The Dope When We Come And Hope For More
Crashing And Choked With A "Slash" In His Throat Like A Gun'n'Roses Whore!

tough as Leather, cant Measure all this Pleasure cuz im Better Than This Lame
im the Veteran To Blame, put an End to ya like the last Letter In Ya Name...

No ones got your Back like a bra with no Strap, boy this aint Hard Do Do
murder kid and his Partner Too, You think your raw, so its time to Barbeque

Cook up this Lame Put ya to Shame have you on a seven day Binger
garunteed you get Injured, getchya ya head on a list...Schindlers

rhymes make ya wanna bump...Blisters...all fresh like Listerine
use my flow to intervene, this dude is Washed up like Mr. Clean

Snicker Sweet, soft ass Wrapper, dude wishes that he Bit This Swagger
Im the Shit, Piss, Bladder...Your rhymes are as on point as a Tipless Dagger

You Bastard aint on my level or my Stature, here after make this kid dissappear...Rapture
....pause...Laughter
cant see me, Casper and Nobodys feeling mutual, like a bunch of single selfish Bachelors

Bar 1)(end to him/end of his name, L is the last letter in his name)
Bar 2) Self Explanatory
Bar 3) Schindlers list was a list of jews that were suppose to be executed
Bar 4) Self Explanatory
Bar 5) Self Explanatory
Bar 6) Rapture is when everyone that is christian dissappears from earth
mutual means to agree, rest should be self explanatory

dammm....

you know this woulda been a good battle in my eyes, but there really arnt any direct punches from either of you. so that took out the 'Oh' factor from both of you...

Punches: neither
Flow: mutual
Multies: omg (some of muts multies seemed forced)
Wordplay: tuff... both had good wordplay but ima say OMG

therefore mvgt: omg...

could came better @ both of you...

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I think this was a good battle,yall jus lacked those hard punches,but yall had some..so punches - OMG,I'd say he came slightly better...multies - tie,wordplay - tie,nameplay - Mutual,Consistency - OMG,Flow - OMG,and mets - Tie...Vote - OMG...Good read n big ups to both.

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Flow -- OMG
Punches -- OMG
Multies -- OMG
Wordplay -- OMG

even tho I felt it was a cat sweep, it wasn't by much...

MVGT: OMG

Punches:Mutual,close though wordplay:omg multis:omg nameplay:mutual flow:omg enjoyment mutual MVGT MUTUAL

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Thx for the Feedback and votes guys...and it was 3-0 before Jsteel voted so that was a KO I believe