Motivation (Rough Draft)

[M33Kish]

Just talkin shit mostly, and I talk about the great parts of life...

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/m33kish/motivation[/soundcloud]

links-
http://soundcloud.com/m33kish/motivation

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/munch ... ml#p175718

[TreTru]

likin this beat...

hmm i'm havin a hard time hearin you..

the flo is decent...ya rhyme schemes trippy ..are you freestylin? if so the lyrics are decent ..
WTF hahahahaha...her PUSSY FARTED?....LMAO

the outtro's cool...
well ya swag on this is pretty good..im not a big fan of freestyle songs unless the lyrics are siiik....and its hard to come up with creative bar after creative bar when its off the top like that.. imo..

well if this was a freestyle this is actually pretty good..
u kept the topic flowin with ya transfers ..this beat is sweet to cypher 2..imo..so thats good ..
some parts are soft tho..so if ya usin digital you might wanna chop the soft spots and turn em up a tad..other than that ....the only thing you could do to make this track better ..imo is write to it...

keep doin ya thing bruh....1

[Defiance]

for some reason i really like your style of rap.. that continuous relentless shit you drop... are you freeing here or you spitting a written either way shit goes hard my dude...

keep it up