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trees is my
habitat,
habitual smoker,
from the canopy im a serious joker,
matter fact
you can call me sarcastic toker,
midnight flights fulla papers like folders,
splinter cell smoker, covert,
hooded up,
cobra,
good enough roller still gettin pro-er,
roll game proper,
twist like copter leaves that fall offa trees,
i rap on trees,
i put wraps on trees,
packing bongs,
puttin trees on trees,
big trees like christmas eve,
freshest buds ever seen,
call em adam n eve



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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tha-m ... ml#p175420

Hmm very short and structure is all over the place.
Not BAD lines tho. Keep doin ya thing bro just put a bit more into ur posts. Kinda wastes ur feeding of two other posts

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the structures fine, my flow makes it work without soundin forced or anything. like habitat rhymes with matter fact, n other shit u might not have picked up on. take my word for it

I fucks with this. Crisp flow, bruh. Good drop.

Oh well thats all that matters then. Just from how i read it, it looks wierd to me. Anyways stay up

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good lookin out dudes, real talk

personal preference, sounds like u have a personal problem,
or a problem personally, regarless its a problem thats not personable..... personification