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Elevate Us

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:23 am
by MonuMental
Depth is dope, at least, when you're deeper than most,
Never boast relevance, I'm just preaching to ghosts,

Thoughts erode sediments, betterment, keeping it close,
Mental coasts where thoughts come and go in a flow,

Teeth on a floor, someone had to push it for more,
Wreath on a door, say goodbye and return to the corn,

Forever more these are truths at humanity's core,
Frail and shunned by most, is our sanity poor,

Is vanity sure or does it flee with youth in time,
Who draws the line, margin of truth in a rhyme,

A booth and a mic, start to blend sound and sight,
A moon and a night, dark making love to the light,

No use in a fight, does the hurt face or hurt fist win,
When the mace sprays does it leave a dent in the wind,

In an AK does the bullet have a name and a map,
In a kids grave, does he know it's more than a nap,

Born into traps, each generation greedier than the last,
The glass is empty, the needy never learn from the past,

Problems we face are ones we hate to ever claim true,
The only way to get straight is to elevate me and you.
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Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:33 am
by probablyTreed
fuckin raw homie, i like the whole elevated idea as i myself try to achieve this. humans are fucked, were aliens! the moon, dark makin love to light line is too raw

Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:50 am
by MonuMental
I appreciate the feed, bruh!!

Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:10 am
by TreTru
Dude no bullshit this is Deep..without puttin cheese on that pizza..real talk....your multis and flo are pretty much perfect for this man..no lie..

uhhmm well ok..where the hell is da beat?...lets go record this already dude!!!haha good shyt mon!

Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:15 am
by MonuMental
Lol I appreciate that, bruh! I would be droppin strictly audio by now if I was still back home lol.

-- Wed Jun 22, 2011 7:15 pm --

Lol I appreciate that, bruh! I would be droppin strictly audio by now if I was still back home lol.

Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:08 am
by Defiance
haha.. yeah yeah this shit was deeper than the mariana trench homie... solid content with a inner message woven into the lyrics... me an you got a pretty simular style and message to our shit... not on that bullshit talking shit type ish.. like it man keep dropping

Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:50 am
by MonuMental
Already, bruh!!

Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:57 am
by Thu Hem
good concept.... nice delivery, vocab... was fuckin dope as fuck and some few multies n inner rhyme kill it man..

Respect.

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Re: Elevate Us

Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:02 am
by MonuMental
Good lookin out.