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5 bars due in 48 hrs after check , bitch you better show im not wasting my time on you

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-- Wed Jun 22, 2011 2:31 pm --

You already lost to Money then why you trying to be funny/
You just a little kid all you do is sit in front of the TV and watch Bugz Bunny/
15 and a dyke, who sucks dick for a quick buck/
Pest and 33 already raped this bitch whats next i already lost all my luck/
1 and 3 damn you just cant be good can you, alright heres a Tip take the Dicks out so we can hear you/
DAMN did you here that, no oh yeah that was your Skills going down the toliet peace thats my cue/
You like a SLUT in nicki cause you just a Wannabee like 2em/
Watch while i CUT her up cause shes GONNA BE Weak like a broken stem/
I eat Meika like she was an Eminem(m&m) but like he said i aint never seen an Ass Like That/
Damn she aint a dealer shes just getting high on coke and water thinking it was just crack/

Joe Saint you’re a faggot ass bitch
You gotta be kidding me is what I thought when I read yo shit
The only you could win this is if I stunted like you and no showed
Stop touching kids and getting grown folk to get your dick blowed (1)
No one cares for you here, so when I KO you it won’t be sad to see
Fuck it, I’ll murder you and your whole damn family (2)
You SUCK Literally so I’m just here to put you back in line
Your bars sound like nursery rhymes and I’m just wasting my time
Playin with guns tryna be big but you’re still a kid Joe
You’re like what 27 and you still fuck 2 year old but yet you wanna call me a hoe (3)

1- when he said he’d touch or fuck 32’s daughter
2- his screen names bein uncles & etc.
3- he always talks about shootin someone or cockin a gun

multies-Meika..joe had alot of single rhymes
punches-meika...joe had 1 decent punch..his last line still an improvement tho..
personals-meika...seems like you had more actual dirt to werk with..
flo-meika..
metas/sims-tie
enjoyment-meika

sorry Joe meika just had more witty lines..her punches were meh also..but she had more and they were worded a lil better imo...jus keep werkin them punchlines joe..technically all you needed was to good punches and better multies to make this a more even bout...

MVGT-Meika

You already lost to Money then why you trying to be funny/
You just a little kid all you do is sit in front of the TV and watch Bugz Bunny/
(lol i laughed at this,not bad)

15 and a dyke, who sucks dick for a quick buck/
Pest and 33 already raped this bitch whats next i already lost all my luck/
(try more multies,personal a bit,it was O.k.)

1 and 3 damn you just cant be good can you, alright heres a Tip take the Dicks out so we can hear you/
DAMN did you here that, no oh yeah that was your Skills going down the toliet peace thats my cue/
(This was disappointing,this a battle,not a bathroom stall joe!)


You like a SLUT in nicki cause you just a Wannabee like 2em/
Watch while i CUT her up cause shes GONNA BE Weak like a broken stem/
(this wasnt that bad,made me think of pokemon with the wordplay?)

I eat Meika like she was an Eminem(m&m) but like he said i aint never seen an Ass Like That/
Damn she aint a dealer shes just getting high on coke and water thinking it was just crack/
(This was Ight,kinda stupid coke isnt crack)


vs

Joe Saint you’re a faggot ass bitch
You gotta be KIDding me is what I thought when I read yo shit
(lol nice,personal,decent punch)

The only way you could win this is if I stunted like you and no showed
Stop touching kids and getting grown folk to get your dick blowed
(funny shit,personal,decent punch)

No one cares for you here, so when I KO you it won’t be sad to see
Fuck it, I’ll murder you and your whole damn family
(personal,not a strong punchline,)

You SUCK Literally so I’m just here to put you back in line
Your bars sound like nursery rhymes and I’m just wasting my time
(not bad,)

Playin with guns tryna be big but you’re still a kid Joe
You’re like what 27 and you still fuck 2 year old but yet you wanna call me a hoe
(personal lol ok punch)

this battle was close,not the strongest battle lol but was entertaining a few decent personals not alot of hard punches but i think meika came with some more personal stuff and just meanier and more punchees,but both could definitley elevate on punches and Wordplay and i want to see some fuckin multies too mothafuckasssss

MVGT MEIKA

MVGT= MEIKA

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Joe Saint
1st bar: no
2nd: nah
3rd: lol at set up, punch? ..nah
4th: weak
5th: not at all..

Meika
1st: lol
2nd: you missed a word.. Nice double personal there
3rd: ok
4th: nah
5th: should've left out 'you're like what' and just started with '27 and...' too many unnecessary words throws the flow off

well.. Saint that pretty much was your worst imo, punches go to meika she had more funny ones n went harder, multis none, personals meika, flow tie, enjoyment meika

MVGT: Meika

that makes it 3-1 not counting 2-em's vote

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JOSEPH:
You already lost to Money then why you trying to be funny/
You just a little kid all you do is sit in front of the TV and watch Bugz Bunny/

NO.

15 and a dyke, who sucks dick for a quick buck/
Pest and 33 already raped this bitch whats next i already lost all my luck/

SHITTY.

1 and 3 damn you just cant be good can you, alright heres a Tip take the Dicks out so we can hear you/

NICE TRY..

DAMN did you here that, no oh yeah that was your Skills going down the toliet peace thats my cue/

THIS SMELLED LIKE ASS

You like a SLUT in nicki cause you just a Wannabee like 2em/
Watch while i CUT her up cause shes GONNA BE Weak like a broken stem/

WORSE BAR IVE EVER READ

I eat Meika like she was an Eminem(m&m) but like he said i aint never seen an Ass Like That/
Damn she aint a dealer shes just getting high on coke and water thinking it was just crack/

U NEED HELP






HEATHER:Joe Saint you’re a faggot ass bitch
You gotta be kidding me is what I thought when I read yo shit

NO.

The only you could win this is if I stunted like you and no showed
Stop touching kids and getting grown folk to get your dick blowed (1)

NO.

No one cares for you here, so when I KO you it won’t be sad to see
Fuck it, I’ll murder you and your whole damn family (2)

FUCK NO.

You SUCK Literally so I’m just here to put you back in line
Your bars sound like nursery rhymes and I’m just wasting my time

HUH?

Playin with guns tryna be big but you’re still a kid Joe
You’re like what 27 and you still fuck 2 year old but yet you wanna call me a hoe (3)

FART.


THIS HURT TO READ CUZ IT WAS AWFUL..
HOWEVER I HAVE TO VOTE AND IM VOTING FOR MEIKA CUZ HER BARS FLOWED BETTER? YEAH, THATS IT..THEY FLOWED BETTER..

VOTE: HEATHER