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Seizin the Spot

Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 6:05 am
by Defiance
never hesitant i represent hip hop to the fullest
i swallow bullets and spit lead with sharp focus
the hardest know its str8 crack in my dopeness
to those closest i'm bringin hope to the hopeless
and i chose this, in interest of my evolution
im the solution to clear up this rap pollution
a broadened nuisance that doest give 2 shits about the new shit
here to prove this isnt a game its my infusion
i lace contusions in my flagrant architecture
a heartless veteran better than a heart thats measured
i mark an sever ties bound in the darkened desert
im starting better no person has me parked or tethered
it marks adventure as i start on my narrow path
im an arrow that doest stray like a pharaohs cat
im mystic like a taro stack predicting my rise
as im lifting my eyes to fight this feeling inside
i'm living to die but on my own terms giving it pride
minds a prison inside confines break with rhymes
seismic i shake the times every time i state my lines
i create the signs engineered to praise and save my mind
im greatness primed that unsigned releasing my thoughts
easing this drop on top like its greased in the slots
pleasing the flock with speech that i seize on the spot

Re: Seizin the Spot

Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:34 am
by MonuMental
It was your usual fire, still no changes to suggest, only props to give. These were the standout bars of this piece for me:
i lace contusions in my flagrant architecture
a heartless veteran better than a heart thats measured
i mark an sever ties bound in the darkened desert
im starting better no person has me parked or tethered
Good shit, bruh.

Re: Seizin the Spot

Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:59 am
by Defiance
upping

Re: Seizin the Spot

Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:50 am
by Kulture
I felt these lyrics here keep writing man.

"the hardest know its str8 crack in my dopeness
to those closest i'm bringin hope to the hopeless"

Re: Seizin the Spot

Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 3:08 am
by Defiance
uppin

Re: Seizin the Spot

Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:11 am
by TreTru
No Doubt you got ya own style playuh....

it marks adventure as i start on my narrow path
im an arrow that doest stray like a pharaohs cat
im mystic like a taro stack predicting my rise
as im lifting my eyes to fight this feeling inside
^^^Not too bad..i thoght you mentr a different taro at first..haha

good drop bruh...1

Re: Seizin the Spot

Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:39 am
by Thu Hem
Respect man...
nice drop seemed like u n monumental,
got this rhyme section.

LOL..

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