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Here's my check

And there's my links:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/scott ... 22658.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/pest- ... 22660.html

Check..

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votes: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/s3v3n ... 22401.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/meika ... ml#p174848

I'll post links soon... It was a pain trying to get this verse up with everything going on today...

Okay, so this guy is... The leader of Dark Side, a group with SplashKING and Kause MC?!?... Oh, and you live in South Africa, right? Aight man, let's get one...

Yeppp... The Dark Prince of what, exactly?!?


I bomb spits with the traits of being armored and dealing fates, constant with the greats
And that's NOT you just in case, you dont think I 'rip bars apart' like convicts in escapes ?!?!?!?!

You treat this art without care, So fucking bright how can they see the Dark with my glare ???
You living in 'South Africa with net access' when all I see are commercials of kids starving out there ?!?

Im pure in speech, when I talk it's so sure I speak to lesser emcees to try and cure the weak
I feel you 'stole the wins you DO have', cause the name Dark Prints/Prince only gives people the idea you're a thief !!!

I brush you off my shoulder, look! Rip apart your crew, battling me is the only way ya'll would get over-booked !!!!
"King", "Prince", shit I'll have these soldiers shook, this 'beef' 'meats' the '"Dark Side'" 'kause' it's surely "over-cooked" !!!
(THAT'S wordplay, muthafucka !!!!)

Punch you in the dome til you barf spits, like he's playing with crayons, you're MARKED KID !!
You need to "sit down" but "get off it", dont you know that ''Kuhler'''d people already OWN Dark Prince/Prints ?!??!?

--------- I'M ---------
Inherently skilled to have you aggressively killed while I relentlessly peel progressively atcha opticals!!

I'mma cheat tha expentancy n leave you with no indemnity cuz ye style lacks integrity and the only time ye part of collectively ill* is when ye in hospitals!!!

i'mma murk old mcnasty**, leave 'em cold n clammy, would gladly hurt this fool so badly it'll wake his great granny n she'll go back to the grave after seein the fail of her family!!!!

Damn B!! I know ye goin react madly! Check this vet's expired; you best get retired; I'll leave ye head ignited; only then you'd be blessed with fire like hell cuz ye can't endure-a-cell (duracell) you left worn out like batteries!!

Yo this be tha biggest fag on illest, slacks cause he in-te-rest (into rest)
I got drunk n punch'd this hag and he flu away when he claimed to be tha sickest!

(see attachment)

you're only flyer doing my promos, you ol' homo gettin chirpy with flows that be murky..
Goin loco 'cause you get mo' old like joe blow with no hoes and left dead with no-shows like your fuckin tourney..



Expos:
* he's in the collectively ill crew
** he's previous alias on illest was murk mcnasty
links provided for others

battle is a battle.. Peace.

---vote--

Flow: both were nice but IMO murk just edged it.
Multies: tie both had some nice multies.
Personals: both had it but again for me murk took it with the starving kids in Africa line
Name/wordplay: murk for the kause undercooked line, dope shit.
This was a nice battle, but
mvgt: murk or whoever he is now

[ Post made via iPhone ]

I bomb spits with the traits of being armored and dealing fates, constant with the greats
And that's NOT you just in case, you dont think I 'rip bars apart' like convicts in escapes ?!?!?!?!

PLAAAAAYYYYEEEEDDDDD

You treat this art without care, So fucking bright how can they see the Dark with my glare ???
You living in 'South Africa with net access' when all I see are commercials of kids starving out there ?!?

LoL

Im pure in speech, when I talk it's so sure I speak to lesser emcees to try and cure the weak
I feel you 'stole the wins you DO have', cause the name Dark Prints/Prince only gives people the idea you're a thief !!!

NOT BAD.

I brush you off my shoulder, look! Rip apart your crew, battling me is the only way ya'll would get over-booked !!!!
"King", "Prince", shit I'll have these soldiers shook, this 'beef' 'meats' the '"Dark Side'" 'kause' it's surely "over-cooked" !!!
(THAT'S wordplay, muthafucka !!!!)

I LIKED THIS

Punch you in the dome til you barf spits, like he's playing with crayons, you're MARKED KID !!
You need to "sit down" but "get off it", dont you know that ''Kuhler'''d people already OWN Dark Prince/Prints ?!??!?

ALREADY USED THIS CONCEPT












--------- I'M ---------
Inherently skilled to have you aggressively killed while I relentlessly peel progressively atcha opticals!!

I'mma cheat tha expentancy n leave you with no indemnity cuz ye style lacks integrity and the only time ye part of collectively ill* is when ye in hospitals!!!

THIS RHYMED WEIRD. FLOW WAS OFF

i'mma murk old mcnasty**, leave 'em cold n clammy, would gladly hurt this fool so badly it'll wake his great granny n she'll go back to the grave after seein the fail of her family!!!!

NO.

Damn B!! I know ye goin react madly! Check this vet's expired; you best get retired; I'll leave ye head ignited; only then you'd be blessed with fire like hell cuz ye can't endure-a-cell (duracell) you left worn out like batteries!!

COOL WORDPLAY BUT NEEDS TO BE REWORDED.

Yo this be tha biggest fag on illest, slacks cause he in-te-rest (into rest)
I got drunk n punch'd this hag and he flu away when he claimed to be tha sickest!

NO.

you're only flyer doing my promos, you ol' homo gettin chirpy with flows that be murky..
Goin loco 'cause you get mo' old like joe blow with no hoes and left dead with no-shows like your fuckin tourney..

DECENT TRY HERE


KINDA OF A CLOSE BATTLE. SOME PLAYED LINES BY BOTH EMCEES. I WAS FEELING MURK'S VERSE A LITTLE MORE. HE HAD BETTER WORDPLAY WHICH WAS THE ONLY TOSS UP CATEGORY IMO.. SO MY VOTES GONNA HAVE TO GO TO KUHLER

I bomb spits with the traits of being armored and dealing fates, constant with the greats
And that's NOT you just in case, you dont think I 'rip bars apart' like convicts in escapes ?!?!?!?! (7/10 nice opener)

You treat this art without care, So fucking bright how can they see the Dark with my glare ???
You living in 'South Africa with net access' when all I see are commercials of kids starving out there ?!? (8/10 mercy! lol)

Im pure in speech, when I talk it's so sure I speak to lesser emcees to try and cure the weak
I feel you 'stole the wins you DO have', cause the name Dark Prints/Prince only gives people the idea you're a thief !!! (7/10 good wordplay)

I brush you off my shoulder, look! Rip apart your crew, battling me is the only way ya'll would get over-booked !!!!
"King", "Prince", shit I'll have these soldiers shook, this 'beef' 'meats' the '"Dark Side'" 'kause' it's surely "over-cooked" !!!
(THAT'S wordplay, muthafucka !!!!) (7/10 good good)

Punch you in the dome til you barf spits, like he's playing with crayons, you're MARKED KID !!
You need to "sit down" but "get off it", dont you know that ''Kuhler'''d people already OWN Dark Prince/Prints ?!??!? (8.5/10 ouch!)

Grade: 37.5/50
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Inherently skilled to have you aggressively killed while I relentlessly peel progressively atcha opticals!!
I'mma cheat tha expentancy n leave you with no indemnity cuz ye style lacks integrity and the only time ye part of collectively ill* is when ye in hospitals!!! (6.5/10 stretched bro)

i'mma murk old mcnasty**, leave 'em cold n clammy, would gladly hurt this fool so badly it'll wake his great granny n she'll go back to the grave after seein the fail of her family!!!! (7/10 good good)

Damn B!! I know ye goin react madly! Check this vet's expired; you best get retired; I'll leave ye head ignited; only then you'd be blessed with fire like hell cuz ye can't endure-a-cell (duracell) you left worn out like batteries!! (6.5/10 wasn't feelin it)

Yo this be tha biggest fag on illest, slacks cause he in-te-rest (into rest)
I got drunk n punch'd this hag and he flu away when he claimed to be tha sickest! (6/10)

(see attachment)

you're only flyer doing my promos, you ol' homo gettin chirpy with flows that be murky..
Goin loco 'cause you get mo' old like joe blow with no hoes and left dead with no-shows like your fuckin tourney.. (7.5/10 liked the personal)

Grade:33.5/50

MVGT: Kuhler