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In the darkest of the night, i can see em shiftin shapes/
Frozen, i sit in place, petrified, no shit is safe/
Twistin lakes, its been 6 days since i caughta z/
Psychotic scenes, crystal flakes spawna sik n twisted face/
Acidic taste, the sickness weighed inna decimals n fraction/
Creating the shadow people, birthed from chemical reaction/
Halloucinatin, minds breakin, takin away from the sanity/
Now the grounds shakin, tektonics plates ruinin my concience vanity/
Stand to me, red eyes wide, hide behind the lies of pain/
This is my demise, sky rise in the plight of the flight of shame/
But to my side it came, threw out the loss and Sparked the feeling of gain/
and the homies who introduced the bitch are now feeling the same/
Is this factual or is it still in my brain, inna dark room and im rockin now/
Trynastop the sounds, heart pumpin fast, paranioa droppin down/
Peepin out the windows, they commin for me, ima lock it down/
Sit back and blow clouds, now the shadow peope poppin out/

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haha..nice imagery, flow, rhyme scheme .. a decent lil drop here man..no doubt



But to my side it came, threw out the loss and Sparked the feeling of gain/
and the homies who introduced the bitch are now feeling the same/
Is this factual or is it still in my brain, inna dark room and im rockin now/
Trynastop the sounds, heart pumpin fast, paranioa droppin down/
Peepin out the windows, they commin for me, ima lock it down/
Sit back and blow clouds, now the shadow peope poppin out/

I liked how you rode out on this one so Props..


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I'm pretty sure you should call this one "Just Say No to Drugs" ...haha.........1

Nice imagery and emotion on this one. You definitely set a tone with this piece. Flow and multies on point, as well. The ending was tight.