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Dnt care how many bars drp by 2morrow by 5...or wutever

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i would like an even bar count...i'll check when you give a bar count...that way amount of material doesn't cause an advantage or disadvantage..how about 5 bars(10 lines)

Les go 8 thas coo

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-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:14 pm --

No crew votes

-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:48 pm --

I'm strapped wit a armed bomb bout to give u a hug
ill be doped on drugs Long as I get u I'm not givin a fuck
Before it get to that point ull already be under the mud
stabbed, shot up, got info out of u n now I'm plugged

Had to cut the middle man so I'm on top like sealin fans
I usually battle for 7grand cuz I'm hot enough to get ur crew members banned
plz understand im on a killin spree like the son of Sam
Run a fuck Marathon on ur girl no Trojan man

Grim don't wanna battle he's into dancin wit stars
I'm handsome wit scars ur handsome to tards
U were never ready to battle me u should sharpin ur bars
U runnin fast as FUCK I'm usin bazookaz n Snipers if u to far


I'm nastier then Chester the child malester
Cut ur body in parts like this a episode of Dexter
Send ur body parts to ur mom n who I'm aiming at wit this suppressor
I'm killing who say they the best I'm done wit grim which girl is next

Well, for one thing RUM KING you rap as good as drunk sings
You got bum schemes and say dumb things that mean absolutely nothing.

I'm MUR-KING RUM KING just by flipping his first syllable
Proving this nerds killable and that he deserves all the ridicule

Pitful...that's the best way to describe your witless banter
It's like going to strip clubs and seeing all titless dancers (boring)

I'll snap your clavical when I attack like an animal
You couldn't rap an actual..verse if you had a fucking manual

So before you ever murder a track a fat man will hurdle Iraq....
A turtle will rap or your mom will do a sit up with her girdle in tact

And since I'm sure it'll snap that means your verses are whack
You have the depth of a man drawn with five lines and a circle attached

Even when I use generic lines your's don't compare to mine
So bare in mind I carry rhymes that'll tare your spine

Outta your back like Sub-Zero..Mortal Kombat fatality
I'll win this battle easy and you can't stop that reality.

yo...

flow: grim, his bars are bars
punches: grim, he came more direct
multies: grimothy
creativity: tie
personals: grim, but i can really see the murking king rum line gettin played being as i just used something similar...
enjoyment: grim

pretty mucha sweep, grims read was eaiser and his punches were more direct...

i see potential rum... but u gotta attack the guy and not hit self hype... maybe try a topical batte

mvgt: grim

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Flow grim
Multies grim
Punches grim
Enjoyment DEF grim
Creativity grim..
Personals grim

Mvgt grim

Yo rum its good to c u battlin man just gotta step ya game up n really research your opponent and just lyrically u need to reach another level. Keep it up man. Nice battle both u

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I agree with both kingrum you won't have much trouble adapting to the site if you haven't you should read battle rules try to not use universal stuff name flips are important wordplay and punches are a must and always research your opponents to hit them with a few personal attacks
Win the cats win the match
Personals no one to be expected when one is new
The rest to grim
MVGT Grimlin

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