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This is the beat: http://www.shadowville.com/121859/genre ... -the-world

The verse starts goes from 00:53 - 01:45

Every time I hear a Top-40 song that's reported on
I'm wondering what the f**k is wrong? Am I alone?
Am I the only one who appreciates what it takes
to put your soul in the quotes you pray and hope will never fade
but change hearts with the art you create and statements that you've made
but without a catchy-hook your rhyme-book's just a waste of space
so it seems cuz the crowds, don't want something that's profound
they just want entertainment, they're cravin' Bozo the clown
so take a bow. cuz now? that time is over
its the mythical mic magician spittin wisdom like molars
my writing's like lightning, competition wishin it's over
but I'm on an expedition, my mission is to spit colder
until I eclipse any rapper claiming that they're solar
I'll crush em like a boulder then like HOVA wipe the dirt off my shoulder
I thought I told ya....I'm tired of you posers
Your streak is diminished, finshed, i'll end it then send you closure

zzzzzzzzzzz....

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Alright man, lets follow the rules, please update this with links or I'll have to lock this up.

i seen wordplay here and there,i liked the overall topic and there was steadly flow and punches,,,keep writing homie

This was ok man. Throw a few more multis in ur writtens tho its just a bit too basic for my liking. Keep writing. Lookin forward to more

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awful.