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im not limited to a one way perspective
flipping shit so i dont leave stones neglected
following the thin lines drawn and connected
my flows measured in joules you can call it electric
a hip hop eccentric just painting a scene
staying on my grind so im remaining supreme
crem dela crem shit im the main in the cream
the foundation was found blazin but clean
staying unseen till i rock the world wit my presence
true skill and lyrics be laced in my essence
im rolling for the goal and hitting high 7's (6+1)
if i got out of rap, hip hop would be my severance
a flowin tempest a storm brewing on the horizon
i tear off roofs so theres severe weather advisement's
a saint and a tyrant the opposite and positive
harmonious with all of this dropping like an operative
turning this vacant desert into something prosperous
its quick to burn and stay lit its written phosphorus
a living nautilus in this concrete metropolis
popping shit giving it my way down broadway
i just want to be heard and have these songs played
thats why i giving it my all, every and all day

damn def you droppin mad peices. like crazy. i opened this one up, decided to see what the haps was. and very impressed man. this was a nice peice. good structures on this. i like your crossover rhymes to switch up the rhyme pattern.

a flowin tempest a storm brewing on the horizon
i tear off roofs so theres severe weather advisement's

^^this flowed nice to me.

harmonious with all of this dropping like an operative
turning this vacant desert into something prosperous
its quick to burn and stay lit its written phosphorus
a living nautilus in this concrete metropolis

^^this as well had a nice pattern to it, with nice choices of words.

this is nice man. why dont you try laying these down?

Hey man nice written! I got a tech nine instrumental bumpin n rappin this in my head to it. The flows great concept is coo, seemed like u stay consistant with it and multis here and there are good. Would u b down for a collab on this if u wanna put it to a beat? Sounds good..

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yeah man i'd be down to do a collab wit cha.. send me the beat.. or pm me a link to down load it

Well.. Here in AUS its 9 am lol and im at work so wen i hit the computer ill get to it bro. Or u can choose a beat n organise it for my email man? Up to u bro

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yeah for sure man that sounds tight