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i write x amount of letters for x amount of mistakes,
i cry x amount of tears while my ex moves outta state,
i guess i'm just an x man cuz my next plan is to stop plannin,
while i just sit back, relax, and let shit happen,
cuz i can't even see through these blood shot eyes,
she went to LA...
and i went out my mind,
we made our mistakes,
and i was outta line,
but she went to the clinic and that baby should be mine,
but i wasn't included,
maybe if i wasn't stupid i'da stuck around,
and at least we coulda tried,
shit, i coulda used it,
with all of these excuses that i'm usin,
no direction's in my life,
if i could go back in time,
you know what i'd do and everything would be alright,
so i got this box of wine and a cheap bottle of vodka,
fightin my sobriety gives me somethin to hold onta,
maybe when i call ya,
you can convince me everything'll be ok up in the long run

-- Wed Jun 15, 2011 11:36 am --

i'm looking at it written out, and it seems like it might be hard to picture the flow. but out loud, it works. i guess i write kinda funky

You need to feed two pieces and post the links on here or they're gonna lock your shit.

i think i fixed it. thanks man

This felt more like a poem at the beginging but an overall good drop. 8/10

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yeah i liked it.. and it did flow out loud with a lot of stumbling. but still dug the fact that it was real.. not just a grip of shit talking...

keep dropping