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LivenLearn - Relapse
Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 3:05 am
by Livenlearn
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 12:26 am
by Coherent
This was dope. Delivery was on point, flow was nuts. I'm lovin' this beat too. I wish it was longer though.
Re: LivenLearn - Relapse
Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 12:42 am
by Livenlearn
Thnx for the support man, yea I agree it could be longer, Im just tryna put these short tracks out while prepare for my mixtape, which will have full length songs for most of them....again I appreciate the listen
Re: LivenLearn - Relapse
Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:06 am
by Grim
fairly simple rhyme scheme in spots but smooth in other spots and i did like some of the multies...a little more umph or cockiness in you voice would be nice but the vocab was solid too...imo the vocab may have made your rhymes more simple sounding in the beggining but when you mixed in a few internals it picked up for...i enjoyed this overall though for sure...keep dropping
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:10 pm
by M33Kish
vocab and delivery were on point (im a co-sighner) flow was pretty coo too for you style. Beat was real coo and your chilled flow made it sound that much better man. that mixtape better bring the dopeness........
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 6:01 am
by Livenlearn
glad u feeln it, Ill try to smooth out the flow a lil better, and make my other songs a lil tighter...Def. M33kish the mixtape will be dope, better than the stuff I post on online...pz. and thnx again