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HEY FUCK U GUYS Y DIDNT U TELL ME ABOUT THIS SITE BEFORE...I PROLLY WUD HV BEEN HERE BEFORE I WUZ 4...ITS SUPER POPPIN N IM DIGGIN U GUYZES FLOETRY...IMA POET TOO BUT I JUS THOUGHT ID SEND A NOTARY...THIS TOPICS PROLLY GONNA GET REMOVED CUZ ITS NOT POETRY...IM SORRY IF MY CONDUCT IS DISORDERLLY...IF UR FROM THE WOOD U PROLLY HEARD OF ME...I CASTRATE RAPPERS FOR EVEN IMAGING THEY CUD MURDER ME...WAKE UP FROM THAT DREAM SWEATIN HORRIBLY...THEN ILL JUMP OUTTA UR CLOSET AND STAB U HOREDLY...2 SWITCH BLADES N U AINT STOPPIN THIS ...CUTTIN ALL VITAL POINTS BUT IM AIMIN FOR UR ESOPHAGUS ...LAST WORDS WERE I AM NOT A BITCH...BUT I TREAT U LIKE IT NE WAY.....I HATE MY LIFE I MIGHT BE EVICTED TODAY...

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you got some bars rum,
my only advice now is to,

make the structure of your verses like this,
you can edit and fix it,it makes it so much easier

Appreciate the feedback n advice...
It is easier

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