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Ill peeped MonuMentals "ASCENSION" will post links:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/ascen ... 22778.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/try-a ... ml#p174338 (audio feedback)



my raps surpass visuals fashion mad syllables
packed with mass digital graphs that match miracles
past ya raps pitiful slashing mass lyrical kats
who brag criminals thats some wack spiritual
act to stack minimal cash get smacked pitiful
crafting track intervals attracting fags into you
that in facts literal!...

um...thats all i had wrote so far lol >:/

um, i might add to this verse, i was actually gona do it to
that KANYE WEST- DIAMONDS instrumental, cuz i heard it on
"GAME's 300 bars and running" and beat sounds dope, thats
what i wrote the lyrics to. should i finish this?

Man, why did you stop there? You need to revisit this shit and lengthen it out, I wanna see it twice or thrice as long, because what I read here was fuckin sick, dude. Do that shit.

Yea this is good man great multis and flow imo. But needs to b longer for sure. Yea i wanna hear that on a beat lol cool written man for what it is

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haha true, thanks homies. Its been a while since i wrote in that style
ill throw up some other writtens i got layin round some wheres..

preciate the feeds,yall can drop more links to your pieces if you want me to peep em.

Shit just rolled right off the tounge! Diggin the wordplay!
NICE PEN!!

yeah for sure finish this shit, it was good.. liked your rhyme scheme.. finish this shit