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House rules

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-- Sun Jun 12, 2011 1:06 am --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/wiz-k ... ml#p174068

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who will drop 1st ?

-- Sun Jun 12, 2011 8:04 pm --

I hope you won't regret calling me out, you snot-nosing joke
1 snub-nose, has ya dick riding 'n froth swallowin' exposed
If Joe is a saint, he should stop ridin' the white horse
He likes a Black stallion, that calls'em his white whore
I'll make a fake Saint Nic, see his past and future hell
'N see now he's askin' satan, for a demon creatures help
You should trow the towel, before you even heared a bell
Smoking Joe, rip'em a new one 'n get rid of a herbs smell
I'm horrofic with it, you tell ya funny story go head dimwit
I'll murk you 'n be done with it, the end of yo wack gimmicks
Pen this down, for you ever try and see me as half-witted
I Ain't going halfs on shit 'n Snake Saint you half-with-it
Drop dead, you feeding crack head wasn't 1st to drop his
Yo Plageratin' Saint, 'll get a back hand smack 'n love it

Saint Nic .. as in nickame of a saint and St Nicholas
Smoking Joe... as in Joe Frazier

-- Mon Jun 13, 2011 6:51 am --

I think I win due to a no show?

can a admin close this and up my win count

what no body told me that
and FYI it was house rules on voting
and not house rules overall
Due time we aggreed on ws 24Hrs

so I geuss I win if you look at it that way

It says house rules...

So we play it house rules....

24 hrs to drop, house rules states every day late after that is a vote against them...

Pretty simple, stop free posting, what I wrote stands.

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Ill smack tha devious one like I got a foam finger/
he came to illest to sit,talk and linger/
He aint. Worth shit cause he aint a Maker of Money/
hes just a Faker who eats carrots like hes Bugz Bunny/
How is this bitch Dedicated when hes been gone since March/
Hes small like hes made of Gluclose while im Bigger and better like im made of Starch/
DEVIOUS aint an MC cause this Man cant Cee(See) while hes got Cum in his face/
His bitch wasnt happy when he told her he was Gay, his bitch finshed a Can of MACE/
This bitch needs to be deported cause he lost his Green Card/
All Devious is, is a little kid who cant stop playing with
pokemon Cards/
1 and 0 you aint a battler just a Faker/
You better watch your back cause you bout to be robbed,Takers/
Imma crush this bitches Carrer before i leave/
I guess you can call me Everlast imma QUITTER/


peace Illest

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I hope you won't regret calling me out, you snot-nosing joke
1 snub-nose, has ya dick riding 'n froth swallowin' exposed
(didnt really connect)

If Joe is a saint, he should stop ridin' the white horse
He likes a Black stallion, that calls'em his white whore
(not that bad)


I'll make a fake Saint Nic, see his past and future hell
'N see now he's askin' satan, for a demon creatures help
(wasnt feeling,there was nameplay,)

You should trow the towel, before you even heared a bell
Smoking Joe, rip'em a new one 'n get rid of a herbs smell
(this was better,good nameplay,)

I'm horrofic with it, you tell ya funny story go head dimwit
I'll murk you 'n be done with it, the end of yo wack gimmicks
(this was ightt,not-solid)

Pen this down, for you ever try and see me as half-witted
I Ain't going halfs on shit 'n Snake Saint you half-with-it
(nooo )

Drop dead, you feeding crack head wasn't 1st to drop his
Yo Plageratin' Saint, 'll get a back hand smack 'n love it
(wasnt feeling)

vs

ll smack tha devious one like I got a foam finger/
he came to illest to sit,talk and linger/
(lol this was funny,not bad)

He aint. Worth shit cause he aint a Maker of Money/
hes just a Faker who eats carrots like hes Bugz Bunny/
(this was lame bro this was not a diss)

How is this bitch Dedicated when hes been gone since March/
Hes small like hes made of Gluclose while im Bigger and
better like im made of Starch/
(ok ok)

DEVIOUS aint an MC cause this Man cant Cee(See) while hes got Cum in his face/
His bitch wasnt happy when he told her he was Gay, his bitch finshed a Can of MACE/
(not bad)

This bitch needs to be deported cause he lost his Green Card/
All Devious is, is a little kid who cant stop playing with
pokemon Cards/
(whackk)

1 and 0 you aint a battler just a Faker/
You better watch your back cause you bout to be
robbed,Takers/
( NO.)

Imma crush this bitches Carrer before i leave/
I guess you can call me Everlast imma QUITTER/
(gayyyy)
this was a pretty average battle at best,
MVGT thadevious1

Devious:

I hope you won't regret calling me out, you snot-nosing joke 1 snub-nose, has ya dick riding 'n froth swallowin' exposed

flow attempted but imo didn't really work, punch a bit meh..

If Joe is a saint, he should stop ridin' the white horse He likes a Black stallion, that calls'em his white whore

ok...

I'll make a fake Saint Nic, see his past and future hell 'N see now he's askin' satan, for a demon creatures help

nameplay..set up.. But Punch? 4/10

You should trow the towel, before you even heared a bell Smoking Joe, rip'em a new one 'n get rid of a herbs smell

this was aight

I'm horrofic with it, you tell ya funny story go head dimwit I'll murk you 'n be done with it, the end of yo wack gimmicks

nothing really that hard hitting..

Pen this down, for you ever try and see me as half-witted I Ain't going halfs on shit 'n Snake
Saint you half-with-it

nah

Drop dead, you feeding crack head wasn't 1st to drop his Yo Plageratin' Saint, 'll get a back hand smack 'n love it

flow is off, pretty weak for an ending tbh

Joe Saint:

Ill smack tha devious one like I got a foam finger/ he came to illest to sit,talk and linger/

decent

He aint. Worth shit cause he aint a Maker of Money/ hes just a Faker who eats carrots like hes Bugz Bunny/

this is weak money maker.. And wtf "eats carrots like hes bu-" fuck it

How is this bitch Dedicated when hes been gone since March/ Hes small like hes made of Gluclose while im Bigger and better like im made of Starch/

weak....

DEVIOUS aint an MC cause this Man cant Cee(See) while hes got Cum in his face/ His bitch wasnt happy when he told her he was Gay, his bitch finshed a Can of MACE/

you should't have said "his bitch" a second time it threw your flow off, you should've just said "she" as you already introduced the subje- man didn't you do english in school?

This bitch needs to be deported cause he lost his Green Card/ All Devious is, is a little kid who cant stop playing with pokemon Cards/

son...


nevermind....

1 and 0 you aint a battler just a Faker/ You better watch your back cause you bout to be robbed,Takers/

you really think this is a good bar? No really?

Imma crush this bitches Carrer before i leave/ I guess you can call me Everlast imma QUITTER/

whack

Punches: devious , Joe you were dissapointing really we all thought you were getting better each time
Flow: some of saint's rhymes just threw the flow off the verse seemed completely unfocused on, devious wasn't that good but had a little
Multis: joe's bars were basic, devious didn't have anything outstanding but had it nonetheless
Personals: both had nameplays so i'mma give this a tie
Enjoyment: none really, I'm sorry...
Put more effort into what you right..

Well yo.. Devious had some decent rhymes n bars, i'm being honest as I am with no hate, when i say joe sucked here and I say that coz he is way better than this i'm sure many would agree with me.. Just below average battle imo

MVGT: thadevious1

2-0 then..

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