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You think your sick, I'm in a whole other class// spiked my nans drink and raped her in the ass// didn't lube it up man- there was no grease// pulled out and made her lick her shit off my piece// laughed as she was choking// held her hubby at gunpoint and recieved another stroking// made him swallow the fluid that I spat// then scratched he's eyes out like an agitated cat// I listen to the voices in my head// the ones that say my family should be dead// hitman for free- require no bread// run up with carrier bags and suffocate my wife as she sleeps in her bed// rape the cold corpse with no remorse// keep it for a year and fuck it again--- of course// rotten flesh wrapped around my dick// bust inside and create a zombie kid//

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-- Fri Jun 10, 2011 7:00 pm --

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lol wtf this is dope tho, creative good flow and imagery is good, liked the last bar best

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definitely on a horrorcore vibe here.
shit's twisted, which is what I like every now and then.
killer flow, creative, even if some concepts were ones i've heard and seen before.

It was sick and demented, but that only means you hit the concept dead on the head. I enjoyed it, but I think you should revisit this verse and make it longer, really go in depth on the sickness that breeds inside your mind. That shit would be dope. Tight drop, bruh.

Yppin

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-- Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:58 am --

Uppin

I love horrorcore, flow and imagination in this man but the first line was funny and sick in the head lmao,, thats what I love to see keep it up bro.

lol dont rape your moms man.. thats fucked up on several levels of fucked.. but this shit made me laugh and be shocked at the same time..

fix the structure, i find my self reading it instead of flowing it.. which has to do with the paragraph style of writing.. but keep dropping neilz