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HR Vol 3: I Rise Song Leak (Illest 1st Peak)
Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:29 am
by ER215
I just wanted to leak a song off on my groups upcoming mixtape.
Looking for honest feed back...
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It's a play only link
Track is called PSYCHO
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single ... 33770&q=hi
Re: HR Vol 3: I Rise Song Leak (Illest 1st Peak)
Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:38 am
by Alvin
okay, nice soft beat, the effect... a little unexpected. Im going to be completely honest, the first verse guy, his ability to say nigga really makes me want to hit next. The mixing sounds good. Ok, wait, the tone shifting sounds weird during the hook. I imagine the second verse is yours? A lot cleaner, better traces of intelligence. The 3rd verse, seems like a good rhyme scheme, but it also sounds unnatural for him. To be honest, brutally, your vocab and delivery as well as style, doesn't match the other two dudes. I'd bump your verse (assuming your on second verse), but not the song as a whole, your shine doesn't get through their mud in all honesty.