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With No Permission

Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 3:41 am
by Defiance
mastered the flow, brought back the factors of old
written scriptures hit cha lyricism back in the folds
attacking my goals, ima dog off his leash snapping a hold
off my high horse putting craft when i rap from my soul
after my shows im the same person, not a actor thats sold
his soul on the crossroads for a platter of gold...
the matters unknown but this rapper is fast on his toes
hitting leaps and bounds with sounds packed in a bowl
a man of action, simply looking for some satisfaction
while rats an has beens take the light with glam an fashion
so i slam wit passion writing the best shit ever wrote
with clever notes written on scrolls with measured strokes
with several quotes spat from my weathered throat
i'll never go cause the evidence presented is too strong
cause a true don never waits he stays while others move on
with every new song i gain strength and prove wrong
all those with doubt in me.. outwardly becoming truth spawned
with no permission, cause the tradition is pessimistic
i dont stress on how i dress cause the best is what i give it
i test the limits give my chest a pivot and press the digits
its freshness visited now give respect to those who did it

Re: With No Permission

Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:02 am
by 32neilz
The closing line done it for me
"I test the digits give my chest a pivot and press the digits,
it's freshness visited, now give respect to those who did it"
overall nice flow, a good read def.
Peace

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Re: With No Permission

Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:08 am
by Enlightend
I liked it... great flow and vocabulary... I personalty like to see a lil wordplay or A punch or two even in a drop like this but to each his own still a hot drop.... keep dropping and stay up

Re: With No Permission

Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:29 am
by Defiance
yeah i dont really want to fall in a groove with what everyones doing.. i like to do my own thang

thanks for the feed uppin

Re: With No Permission

Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:39 pm
by MonuMental
You already know what I'm gonna say. It's absolute fucking fire, just like everything else I've read from you. That is all.