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these arent chimerical rhymes i spit ahead of my time the type ta deadin tha mind
of the blatantly wack im breaking there back then shredding there spine
leave u facing down in a lake ta drowned... ur testin my patients now
and people coming fa me thats fucking funny like raping clowns
cause im the hunter in this, and only time yall Snook E is pumpin ya fists
even gesture defiance U'll end up swept up an dien then dumped with the fish
fuckin with this has the same fuckin effect as Lexapro.. kids cuttin up wrist
or with there lungs in a stitch... hacked, smashed then stuffed in a ditch
see im primarily ill and when i die dont bury me still ill be ready ta thrill
all cat stepped ta me.... killed... like i use a bouncing betty ta spill
blood on the board...im on the Edge of Darkness like Mel Gibsons ugly divorce
my mind sparks, divine thoughts, i never sky walked but im loving the force
put a run in ur shorts cause im so sick and advanced yall shitting ya pants
wanna run well this is ya chance fuck that u shoulda thought bout it in advance
and this is why yall would be mist-if-id really tried while rippin this place
now i hit um with hate, this is ya fate... just some cases of dissin-a-great

I cant do a complete breakdown cos im on my phone but this was a sick read! Great multies, Its hittin strong the whole way through. U really kept my attention ! Mel gibson hahaha

Cool drop man are u gonna spit it on a beat?

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Fuckin sick dude. Nuff said.

Very well done. Flow was on point, multi's were fucking sick. Punchlines are there, wordplay throughout... There's nothing I can say that I DIDN'T like about this one. Impressive, to say the least. Kudos.

these arent chimerical rhymes

Highly improbable rhymes? Fantasy rhymes?

thats fucking funny like raping clowns

u and I have a different sense of humor my friend.

fuckin with this has the same fuckin effect as Lexapro.. kids cuttin up wrist

Muahaha

my mind sparks, divine thoughts, i never sky walked but im loving the force

favorite bar right here!!!

Overall pretty good man, enjoyed the read, you dropped some words which gave the impression you're intelligent but u had more basic vocab to make it only a hunch. Keep dropping man, nice to see you willing to shake the keyboard dust... But what else can you do lol.

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To rape a clown.... is to fuck funny... no

-- Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:15 pm --

Good looks on the feed though...... keep it coming

good shit man, liking the flow.. good vocab usage.. keep it up man