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sickness invoked from the depths of my cranium
causin verbal meltdowns like im spitting uranium
in open stadiums my vocals raise the levels
with rebel yells that be too raucous to settle
showing my medals gained with blood and sweat
tear ducts dried in the muck and dust of death
fuck success acting like notoriety makes the man
what i spit is heat shit i'll turn lakes to sand
no break in stance as i shift to other opponents
i'm twice as sick and quick in a matter of moments
major components never missing from my context
i persevere facing danger like fuck a bomb threat
never a wrong step every foot traveled has purpose
i drop the best shit best script doin rap service
i make the wack nervous they creep on they tip toes
flushing these busters on a regular watch the shit go
i flip flows from good to better ima go getter
bet if i died my name be written wit gold letters
theres no better there was once but they came and passed
most a flash in the pan while defiance is a name ta last

wow.... i was defiantly feeling this... flow was sick.. vocab was off the chain... good drop

favorite line....
showing my medals gained with blood and sweat
tear ducts dried in the muck and dust of death

upping this shizzle

sickness invoked from the depths of my cranium
causin verbal meltdowns like im spitting uranium

sick opener

in open stadiums my vocals raise the levels
with rebel yells that be too raucous to settle
showing my medals gained with blood and sweat
tear ducts dried in the muck and dust of death
fuck success acting like notoriety makes the man
what i spit is heat shit i'll turn lakes to sand

do not operate heavy machinery super dope

i flip flows from good to better ima go getter
bet if i died my name be written wit gold letters
theres no better there was once but they came and passed
most a flash in the pan while defiance is a name ta last

very nice closer everything i left out had a near perfect flow but these bars are powerful in thier own right im sure would be fresh to a beat theres a lot of self hype but imo its motivational theme music type shit and i love it pure art 8.8/10

Flow and multies were dope...did you do this to a beat or a capella??? I read it with a quick flow...anyways...vocab was top notch, I like the self hype, I usually write like that...metaphors and similies were nice...you know what you're doing, handle...

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This shit was as sick as ever, bruh. The opener, especially. Too much to quote here, I'd have to quote the whole fucking thing. Lol. Props, bruh.