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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 5:15 pm
Waddup splizash first thing first. ENERGY! you need it man you need to push those words out like you wanna kill that mic! Your flow needs a lil work but delivery is really what you lack right now. I always tell the new dudes i record with to spit it like your yelling at someone like your angry wit em lol lame i no but trust me you will hear improvement. Dont take this the wrong way man keep goin
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 8:33 pm
**like said above.. delivery could use some energy and flow could use work... dont read your lyrics memorize them (something i dont do cuz im lazy and dont usually care what is pushed out if im not into it example: net battles) but yeah polish up those things nd u could work with the rest lyrically as u advance in audio*