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house rules 5 bars..blah blah blah

check-check guess no time limit :-/ ill have my verse up by midnight

gonna go give feed on peoples stuff

my bad...24 hours is good..due time

-- Fri Jun 03, 2011 7:23 am --

I'll put a strangle hold on S,yeah,I'm gripping this MIC
I'm sick when I write and your just a "bitch that ain't tight"

That's probably why when my punches come it feels like a "gang bang"
I'll leave this "pussy loose lipped", and watch his clitirous hang,DANG!

The only time you cum hard on a MIC is during masturbation.
You look like after your birth the doctor bashed your face in.

The EVIL TRUTH is you're not a SCHOLAR and you don't GET MONEY
swallow MY KIDS as I blaze you like BLUEBERRY KUSH.that SHIT'S funny

I AM JUST A MONSTER,WITHOUT YOU,I feel no GUILT OF A CRIME
LOOK AT ME NOW,this is your LOSING SITE,I'll rebuild it as mine!!

EXPOS: MIC S has made songs named:EVIL TRUTH,SCHOLAR,GET MONEY,MY KIDS,BLUEBERRY KUSH,I AM JUST A MONSTER,WITHOUT YOU,GUILT OF A CRIME,LOOK AT ME NOW,and LOSING SITE (SIGHT..i think)

I spin my "G' Rims" beating grim in, you swear dude was sleepin in
I'm not peepin him cuz The only time i see Grim, is when Im reaping him

I'll give grim bad times, after 2 bars he'll be begging for half time
fuck that, i'll wreck your career have grims life hit a critical flatline* (his website)

Ok, your a dieing breed slim you K.o'ed "Kau & Splash", you had a Lion King win*, but
I wipe my ass with you, shit clogs your limbs the way you have to Fight'ta breathe grim*

Fuck ya life, 32Neils beat you, S3V3NTh1rty K.O'ed you, like your written "what a night"
your lifes grim, the way they beat your life in, they said they'd spare the rest for the Mic... haha get it

grim reaper never took nobody's soul, dude should no show' he blows
The only thing grim about you, is voters have to read what you post




Edit** forgot to add the star
* = Kau the lion & SplashKing

ok overall wasn't really feeling this battle....

grim came ultra simple... in order to fit song names in his lyrics... but it made the whole verse sound forced.. and basic.... a fail in my opinion...

and mic s came with punches that were more like jabs... and only a few connected and a few were just not good at all... but the best line in the battle was

I'll give grim bad times, after 2 bars he'll be begging for half time
fuck that, i'll wreck your career have grims life hit a critical flatline

and i give my vote to

mic s

rhyme scheme... Mic S
Punches... Mic S
Closer... ?
Personals... Mic S
Enjoyment... Mic S

I think using all the song names was a dope concept imo, although yes it did make the verse seem forced and basic, Mic had some bars but all in all

Punches: Mic was more direct
Flow: close though Mic did have better consistency
Multies: Mic
Personal: mic had 3 bars with this cat compared to grim's 2
Enjoyment: tbh I like Grim's concepts more but that critical flatline line was dope and mic's closer was just, harsh lol, i'll give this a tie

MVGT: Mic S

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Both had an OK verse

Punches-GRIM, MIC S YOUR JUST DIDNT HIT AS HARD
Personal-MIC
MulitiesMIC
Flow-GRIM

MVGT-MIC S

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3-0 MIC S...good battle bro