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Iron_Line Vs. JmxTwiztid
Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 8:42 am
by TwIzTiD
Aiight, 6-8 Bars, House rules, But flips are allowed.
Deadline: Friday (Sorry but I got a life and work)
Iron Drops First
-Twiztid
Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 12:56 pm
by Iron_Line
Twizted Im too Gifted To be Fliped UP ON.
You Roll with Three Kings. But tell me WHY U The Pawn???
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Im out mack'n Insane Taunts,
Flaunt the Style Lika Convict,
Tons Of Scipts from past time spent.
IRONS LINE IS FiReN HitZ,
you best off layin low, sitn back, Relax,
and wait'n for IT
you cant comitt With The LeveL Of
these 'Complex' Raps.
Lika Project SuperMan
Everytime i take Flight, Im Bagn another bitch.
Twist You Might wanna conscider pleeding the HipHop 5th.
eh, my balls itch. son this all you got, but
Nuga Before i Get Settled, take that metal grill out ya mouth,
you lookin like some kid in the Ripleys believe it or not house.
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:05 pm
by TwIzTiD
Ayo, Ima drop a bomb on ya, like we did on Japan
Hittin me wit dat wack ass rap, put em in da trash can//
Thinkin he supaman, my flowz tha Kryptonite, dont fuck wit me kent
Why he's weak as fuck, bury ya with tha shit i circumvent//
Theres no relax when weak niggaz try me thinkin dey da shit
Him firin hitz iz like a faggot lickin a clit//
Why tha fuck you tellin me bout yo scabbiez
Actin hard against me, nigga yo rhymez dont phase me//
I cant get on ya level? Weak shits not on a lyrical scale
I didnt superman rides in a chevelle, Your pathetic attempt wuz a fail//
Atleast i live in a house, and pussy dem diamondz off in my mouth, get me out ya mind
Stay yo ass settled, ya shit was just dismantled, back tha fuck off me befo ya jaw get realigned//
-TwIzTiD
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:14 pm
by complexity
Twiztid had a lot more disses. Iron line only had two bars that actually dissed his opponent. Or maybe just one. So when I do vote officially. I will be voting for twiz.
Not a very good battle either way.
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:29 pm
by MesaR
Vote Jmx He Toke all cats
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:49 pm
by Mac
I'm Have To Vote Twiztid, He Came Harder Then Walt. I Think Walt Just Underestimated Him...Good Shit Though Folkz.
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:51 pm
by Mac
complexity wrote:Twiztid had a lot more disses. Iron line only had two bars that actually dissed his opponent. Or maybe just one. So when I do vote officially. I will be voting for twiz.
Not a very good battle either way.
If You Know Who You're Voting For Already, Why Do You Have To Wait To "Officially" Vote?
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 2:36 pm
by complexity
I wanted to give an elaborate vote.
Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 2:45 pm
by complexity
Twistid had about 100 more words. Which completely did it. I don't even know why Iron_line put in the first 3-4 bars. They weren't even battle lines. Neither had great multis. Iron_line, had a decent rhyme scheme but it didn't help him win the battle. Iron_line had better wordplay. Neither had punchlines. Twisted easily took personals which basically gave him the battle. Iron_line didn't even really diss him. When he did diss him it was very generic. Twisted took vocabulary.
Overall vote is twisted.
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