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rhymes resemble solar radiation, i spit a lyricall conversation/
my methods could interupt your auditory sensation/
leave ya skin melting like acidification, i could write a binary notation/
then penetrate ya chick like i was gamma radiation/
i posses powers of regeneration, shoot me for the verification/
my flow goes harder then 5th graders in adult sex education/
my style of rhyming is never detectable, delectable yet never edible/
every written peice of vocabulary is impeccable/
injuries not preventable, verses sure to be no less then incredible/
"stone cold" like Steve yet Stalone type "expendable"/
they can't handle the brightness, now they feeling the blindness/
i'm a enraged caged demon these rappers are birds just flightless/
these rhymes would have you mindless, i show no form of kindness/
so im always sure to push em off the "Hill" like my first name was "Cypress"/
your rhymes come cheap like a dinner set, smoked like a ciggeret/
i got the verses to break your habbits like a daily dose niccorets/
can't compete you just thinking less, come see me at the top like a minaret/
but theres no harmony in your raps means you got em off the internet/
EASY

Blam another dope drop arc. When you coming to the battle grounds?

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haha word up dude!! thx. and idk man i'm thinking about stepping over to the battle zone for a few rounds

Well let me know when man haha

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Definetly bro will keep you posted on that matter!

liked it man, good subject content, flow worked. good vocab.. keep dropping fire

my flow goes harder then 5th graders in adult sex education/
my style of rhyming is never detectable, delectable yet never edible/
every written peice of vocabulary is impeccable/

this is a dope section keep this level of consistency through out your pieces and you will dominate the written forums

here rappers are birds just flightless and here but theres no harmony in your raps means you got em off the internet could have been tightened up other than that this is dope not to take anything from your bars but your closer should always be your hardest bar like how a magician saves his best trick for last it will really leave an impression

7.8/10

word up i'll keep that in mind thanks

The flow here was on point, your imagery was fucking nice, and I liked how you brought wordplay into this. Man, honestly, you keep bringing some very nice pieces to the written section and its great to open something up written by you and know that its going to be a great read. I would give this an 8.5 out of 10.

If you can peep my Words Of Encouragement piece, it would be appreciated.

definetly means alot man.
thank you for the feedback. you definetly made me wanna start dominating the written section

Flow, meta's, multies were good. Some were basic but overall a dope drop...keep writing mayne

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I value the fuck out of a stellar vocabulary, and, amongst other things(flow and dope imagery), you brought that to the table, slapped it down, carved it up and served everyone a piece. Dope shit, bruh. You gotta crisp style worthy of props.

Monu your signature.... Nuff Said

Good drop man, I loved the flow and vocab in this, keep writing.

thank you bruh