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good luck and chizeck,

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sick.. cheeeeck.. expect my verse to be up in a bout 71.59 hours LOL heaps busy. possibly earlier. either way. check

-- Mon Jun 06, 2011 7:53 am --

Heres my half of it

Its best to keep the first aid kit by the stage son for real/
Ill shoot 32 nails at neilz from a nail gun to kill/
Tell this faggot he got the websites all mixed up/
This is illest, not the site you buy tickets to all the gay clubs/ 
Real recognise real so nobody recognise 32/
Get a clue, the truth will follow you until they murder you/
Leave you soakin in your own blood close to death on the floor/
I whipe my ass with your rhyme book cos my shits better than yours/
Ill take this cat back to school and leave him repeating grade 3/
Neilz is the outcome if miley cyrus and billy ray had a baby/
Take the loss like a man and take that dick out yo mouth/
Change your name to 33 nailz cos gettin fucked is what you about/

I'm trying a diffrent kinda structure, here lol.

There's no get out clause for Kause, I'll make him regret accepting wars, he can intercept my swords//
Or paws, adourned with razor claws, I hope he savours gore, cos when it comes to rap- he's flavours poor//
I'll kill this clown, call me the "Kause of death", that one win you got, the only time you'll taste success//
You don't impress, with the lame skill that you possess//
You'd  never win unless, you dressed up as 32 in fancy dress//
Listen up, I'm kausing him to quit, chances of beating neilz is slim to shit//

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Its best to keep the first aid kit by the stage son for real/
Ill shoot 32 nails at neilz from a nail gun to kill/ (decent opener 6.5/10)
Tell this faggot he got the websites all mixed up/
This is illest, not the site you buy tickets to all the gay clubs/ (not hard but kinda funny 6/10)
Real recognise real so nobody recognise 32/
Get a clue, the truth will follow you until they murder you/ (eh 6/10)
Leave you soakin in your own blood close to death on the floor/
I whipe my ass with your rhyme book cos my shits better than yours/ (6.5/10)
Ill take this cat back to school and leave him repeating grade 3/
Neilz is the outcome if miley cyrus and billy ray had a baby/ (6.5/10)
Take the loss like a man and take that dick out yo mouth/
Change your name to 33 nailz cos gettin fucked is what you about/ (6/10)

*Really didnt KILL any lines..some were decent and catchy but no "WoW" ...
Total Score: 37.5/60
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There's no get out clause for Kause, I'll make him regret accepting wars, he can intercept my swords// (6.5/10)
Or paws, adourned with razor claws, I hope he savours gore, cos when it comes to rap- he's flavours poor// (7/10 hit)
I'll kill this clown, call me the "Kause of death", that one win you got, the only time you'll taste success// (6.5/10)
You don't impress, with the lame skill that you possess// (4/10..this counts as one of your bars "//"?)
You'd never win unless, you dressed up as 32 in fancy dress// (lol 7.5/10)
Listen up, I'm kausing him to quit, chances of beating neilz is slim to shit// (7/10 like the slim to shit, never heard that)

No KILLER lines, but a few that were definitely landed.
Total Score: 38.5/60

Confusion on 4th bar from 32...I dunno if it was suppose to be a bar or not? anywho, I gave it a 4 if it is cuz was weak for a whole bar...

38.5 to 37.5

MVGT: 32nielz

well kause mc i was feeling the first few bars then it kinda fell off from there i didnt get wowed by any lines but the flow kept my attention... so thats a plus

32 nielz the multies was decent but i wasnt feeling the punches until the last bar....it just seemed rushed imo

anyways
kause mc get my vote

yo

-flow-kause
-punches-kause
-enjoyment-tie
-personals-tie
-metas-32

-my vote kause mc

flow-kause
punches-kause
enjoyment-tie
personals-tie
metaphors-32neilz
word play-tie

over all i gotta give it to kause good battle guys respect

Punches: Kause
Flow: Kause
Multis: 32
Personals: tie
Enjoyment: 32

imma be real and say that I personally felt 32's bars more, nothing outstanding from either writers, kause came harder with the punches n 32 landed about 2 good ones n had decent multis and structure, kause' was a bit simple, it's very close but in my opinion I just think 32 edged it, so..

mvgt: 32nielz

that makes it 3-2

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Punches-Kause
Flow-32
Mulities-32 even though they seem forced
Personals-tie
Enjoyment-32

MVGT-32

flow-kause
punches-kause
personals-tie
enjoyment-32
multies-32
MVGT-kause

wow this has been up a while...

Punches-Kause
Flow-32
Mulities-32
Personals-tie
Enjoyment-32
Rhymescheme- tie

vote: 32

punches are what make a battle, but you can come with daggers and still not break the skin. that's why 32 got my vote.

next time ya might wanna put up Cats so people dont jus go in randomly...

Punches -Neilz his were more like punches
multi's -neilz
flo- kause
personals-tie
name/wordplay-tie
enjoyment-Kause ..he gave me a few chuckles


Neilz..i liked that structure and multis were strong in da beginning but it started to breakdown towards the middle and end....and it was still real short imo..that new structure can werk for you too, if you finished da lines

Kause..your structure wasn't too bad here ..stretched lines can fit more punches imo..but its all G..ya flo was smooth so i gave ya that ..you did aight wid da personals..and honestly if you had a few more punches..ud have took this clear cut..

i usually dont vote for guys who dont match the amount of bars ...damn dis is hard imma say its a tie man...

Punches: Kause
Wordplay: Kause
Nameplay: Tie
Personals: ---
Multies: 32
Flow: Tie

I was just feeling Kause's punches more. Neither really came with any personal shit aside from nameflips. 32 had some decent multies but it wasn't enough, IMO.

+1 Kause mc

Personals/nameflips- Kause...u had a couple more flips
Punches- Kause..neither wowed me but I found his a lil funnier
Mulities- 32..pretty obvious..32s drop was packed compared to kause's
Meta's/wordplay- none...unless you gonna count 32s. Nameflips
Structure/flow- kause..was much easier to follow

Neither drop was what u expected from the two of you. 32 usually everytime I read a battle from you its fire, maybe not the all time hall of fame but still fire. Kause u got the potential to be much better then what u dropped here. I hope to see another between the two of you that actually attacks eachother.

So overall mvgt kause mc

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-- Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:51 pm --

Personals/nameflips- Kause...u had a couple more flips
Punches- Kause..neither wowed me but I found his a lil funnier
Mulities- 32..pretty obvious..32s drop was packed compared to kause's
Meta's/wordplay- none...unless you gonna count 32s. Nameflips
Structure/flow- kause..was much easier to follow

Neither drop was what u expected from the two of you. 32 usually everytime I read a battle from you its fire, maybe not the all time hall of fame but still fire. Kause u got the potential to be much better then what u dropped here. I hope to see another between the two of you that actually attacks eachother.

So overall mvgt kause mc