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Waddup illest i havnt been on here in ages so i need to get to no all u new dudes!! Good to see everybody still on here tho.. 

Anyway heres a track about shoplifting, my goals to make you laugh so uhh check it out lol 
I want sum feed from u new dudes...

Link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VdhZTyZ- ... ata_player

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Haha this was awesome my dude, definately feeling this. Flow is on point, delivery is confident and you stayed on topic. Only downside i would say is your mixing, your voice sounds a lil fuzzy/distorted. If you can clean up the mixing than this song will go on another level.

u already know what i think about this.... dope shit bro....

Ok...get the negative out the way...I wasn't a fan of the echo sound in the chorus...over all the song was ammusing...real funny and entertaining...lyrically i like the style and simplicty..it worked well for this song...gives it that anthem type feel....some clever lines and funny one liners...interesting topic and nice execution of it...i thuroughly enjoyed this and no offense but if the sound quality was studio quality i would probaly bump this for real...no dick riding man, just saying i like off the wall subjects that still have meaning in life...so respect and nice track

haha this was cool - had your lines.
some funny lines.. not a bad concept

Flow was on point - delivery was cool
Hook sounded distant from mic - but it was catchy

good drop

"do you want help sir" haha

Thanks for the feed guys yea my mixing is quite terrible i know but im glad yas liked it otherwise. I need to save some cash to get sum new equiptment bad.

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ok your the guy with the heavy accent imo..haha

you got them party songs too..i agree about the hook maybe a different type of echo or a delay instead would be better..
it actually sounds like you got some effects on da verses too..just not as heavy..

i like ya stuff though like i said before.it sounds like you might have somethin marketable where ya @...1

Cheers tru yea i got a light flanger on the verses cos my mics not so great, or clear fo that matter. But i hear wat ur sayin man thnx fo feed!

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oh yeah no problem..and btw the effect on the verses sounds nice..no need ta change it..its da hook you might wanna remixx..

aight Kause .. 1