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5 bars/10 lines due sometime soon lol i'll start writing immediately

We've had two rounds..he was jigglez for 1 and static for the 2nd 1.

On my16 bars you used to always beg for rates and collabs
Your line STRUCTURE'S OLD you might as well just sit there and wait to COLLAPSE.

I'll X-STATIC and turn a noun to a verb.
You can't spell when you type without soundin' the words

I bet you copy and paste your rhymes..I'll probably waste my lines
My flow is present time stature your's is outdated like ancient times

'I C you as a STAT' JIGZ..just another notch on my belt
STATIC'S mind is FUZZY,bro,put your writin' book on top of the shelf.

It's best you believe me when I say you can't see me
I'll make STATIC FLAT LINE like test screens on T.V.

it's a tragedy when a God commits blasphemy in this galaxy
creates a reality where he's cool without having to be

imagine he magically got on the radio actively
and i didn't demand he bring my rhyme book back to me

because of this activity Grimm mutated
knowing full well that it's him we hated

then he stated some bullshit how he's racing towards victory
erasing you, like anyone your sites computer history

i'm here to instill the fear of me cause i have to see
into a Eminem wannabe who still works at a god damn factory

-- Thu Jun 02, 2011 1:33 am --

not my absolute best work but i tried lol

Punchlines: Grim (static didn't say too much)
Nameplay: Grim (static said grim's name once within context)
Flow: tie.. for two different reasons i wont go into..
Rhymescheme: Grim (close, static up'd his game here)
Personals: Grim ( for his first line)

vote: Grim

it was like run on sentences vs bars

static you need bars, punchlines, creativity, that sting, less talk more action, overall a decent battle though, static you improved since your previous battles i believe

Flow: I'd say grim, but stats was on point too just felt nicer to read grims.
Nameplay: grim again. Stat didn't really have anything goin on in this cat.
Personals: grim, I'd have to agree with evo. First line, taking it back to when he knew you before.
Punches: grim again, yeah stat you didn't have much if any punch at all.
So cat sweep to grim.

Grim, as always, a good read, nice job bro.
Stat, that wasn't your best as you said, I'm a fan of your style but when it comes to grim you have to come hard, I should know I've lost to him twice. Peace guys.

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that's a perfect reason for expos btw, to point out your personals that others might not have any clue about,

2-0 grim leads

Flow- grim his flowed better static flowed nicely
Nameplay: grim, static didnt use any name as as i saw it?
Personals: grim, i didnt see much personal lines towards grim at all
Punches: grim , he constantly attack static where static seemed to ramble

my vote gos to grim

respect to both of you!

3-0 ME..K.O.