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Community Service:
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/timez ... 22530.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/highe ... 22462.html
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This is the beat:

[soundclick]<div style="width:473px; border:solid #999999 1px; background-image:url('http://www.soundclick.com/images/elogos/SC_ExtBG.png')">
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/aftertouchbeatz'>
<div style="background-color:width:460px; height:45px; cursor:pointer; background-image:url('http://www.soundclick.com/images/elogos/SC_460.png');"></div></a>
<div id="lower"><object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="60" width="473" data="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never" />
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal" />
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf" />
<param name="loop" value="false" />
<param name="menu" value="false" />
<param name="quality" value="high" />
<param name="wmode" value="transparent" />
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=10688644&scid=10688644&q=hi&ext=1" />
<param name="scale" value="noscale" />
<param name="salign" value="b" />
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000" />
</object></div></div>[/soundclick]

Heres what i think of it:

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PpCkYbJCsYY[/video]
Lyrics:
it Feels like Im buried adjacent to my basement/
i can barely see the light with my face laying on the pavement/
the boat to life lynched me to the same place the slaves went/
the things i say meant, something different than whats heard/
when the moon laughs its last is when the last words/
hit the pages .... i crumble up and toss them through the ages/
there written about in raged pens, my souls way spent/
cuz my waists been back bent trying to swallow their lies/
as truth - as much as i despise you i back flip to see blind/
through everything you hide in mind clued, by the thin line in eyes
the lullabys that follow should never be outlined/
but i tried them anyhow/
plenty routs filled my heart with deadly doubt/
im sure not about to let it continue
i want to flip the script but im terrified id lose myself
i refused the help, that tied the noose in hell
so i guess its i who chose to fail -
i move this cell with the heart that never gives/
but in exchange my pain will forever live/


I used a video because im lazy today, but turned out getting a video of it was harder than recording it... I hate you M33Kish for the idea...

Any how, thinking maybe someone would like to join me on the second verse...
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I'll join u on dis homie & props 2 M33kish 4 da idea as well bout uploadin' da vid. I like da concept so I'm down if dats koo wit u nigga.
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Nice shit man that verse was pretty dope you nd hkx would kill that shit, smooth beat too.

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haaa i've got this beat... i was bout to write somethin to it... lol 'sall good!!!! haha
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HKX, he'll yeah foo, Wana roll with the video concept or actual track? I'm down for whatever lol.

M33k, thanks man... Appreciate you taking the time to listen

Lawgix, proof foo, where's it at lol

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Don't matter 2 me we gotta do da track tho dats a must

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Word word, as for the track, I mix?


I think putting a face tithe lyrics makes us more human, maybe we can have pest work it into his pestoe YouTube show and get some exposure through mic s video thang,.. Just ideas lol... We can enchilada shit up lol

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K Panda wrote:Lawgix, proof foo, where's it at lol
soon as i get to the studio to record it.... its all good man.... we could do our own shit to the beat :D
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Why don't you record a video from your phone like me lol... No studio needed lol

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hahaha my phones a piece of shit bro haha
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Jack someones phone lol, I already know what you look like, don't be afraid

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Mix ur part then send it my way as a wav or upload it somewhere & I'll mix my vocals send it back 2 u as mp3 format.

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Re: Collab?

Post by TreTru »

wow..you got a trippy style..imo..your on beat though..
i think theres a couple of drops that i've heard now
with that type of quick flow..aight man..its hard to comment on quality or whatever ..so it is what it is man..do ya thing..
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