Hip Hop Forum

welcome to the school of hard knocks
were felons and criminals limp and guard blocks
cheating card sharks walk the hard walk
and killers dress in garbs to conceal the sawd off
were hard coughs disguise the inner sickness
crimes committed with none left as a witness
no equal reactions here theres no laws of physics
no cops to stop us the caught in the walls of limits
gambits and gimmicks thats wrapped in fraud
sadistic grins cackle they all just laugh at god
as back stabbers watch the back of dogs
no one person is safe from the attacks of mobs
no slack in jaws just frowns with a stiff upper lip
blood stains the streets but most grow numb to it
there out conniving while johnny laws slumbering
nothings guaranteed cept the a gunners tip

This was pretty nice the multis were on point and when you switched up your scheme it kept going a very nice flow to it I was feeling it though..the concept was niiiiice

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well again another nice drop one thing i can say is you are very consistent each drop is always good your concept here is nice i cant give to much criticism because i doo enjoy this except to say that your closing bar shoul always be the nail in the coffin for you verse which is to say you should attempt to sum up the intirety of your drop in those last 2-4 bars with with a smack that engages the reader you did well but there is always room for improvement keep it up though as much as you write you will in no time be an absolute phenom im outta town now or i would break down the bars for you but you already know what it is good shit