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dis is just sum shit I was fuckin around wit

man I was neva like dem other bucks...
In class I been cuttin up... didnt give a motherfuck
wat is up... stick 2 da streets like suction cups
on dat other stuff... touch a slut den I bust a nut
if u got da guts 2 battle da only way u'll win is utter luck
n fuck if I stutter cuz da rhymes higher than butter cup
o wats up? nutin much... writin dis digustin stuff
hotter than da SUN so I am wat u must of TRUST
wanna share dis butter sandwhcih... nah I got sum guts 4 lunch
da flow wud still B stupid even if I wasnt such a dunce
yno da old cliche... butter makes it better
butter makes everything goes smooth like leather
I lick da butter out her pussy... disect her like a professor
then steal da beat n return it like Devin Hester
wat shud I do wit such skill? shoot it up like a old western?
all I do is win... I rub it in like a cigarette burn

n I had another 1 2...

I torcher a bitch then put a torch in her
via vagina Im da kind 2 find a Porsche n cut
da tires... thin it out... hang a dude then abra cadabra like a sorcerer
she need sum prayer... slay her after I play her like an orchestra
we havin whore 4 lunch... Im not ur average nigga
I take a bat 2 tigger till he's decapitated
shove a pack of cigarettes down his throat... n light him as he gets disintegrated
inhale da smoke... n pee on da ashes... lemonade shit
my condom in a dumpster... hump her then dump her
fuck her once or... twice... we bang like bumpers
then I throw her away like deres no receivers open
dont judge me but I need sum skeet 4 my feet 2 soak in
4get lotion... get it wetter than Billy Ocean
lets toast since we havin more than buttersticks... no shit

very simple, but well executed.. flow worked well for the most part.. better multis interlayed would have excentuated the flow way better. but its nice seeing a new face in the written section. keep it up man