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Concept:
Declaration of faith in one's own ability...sort of a "look at me now" type track...

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Not feeling the hook bro, you can spit, just not feeling the singing. the verses were pretty solid though, like good shit solid. keep dropping, just dont sing lol.

^Word...I tried that out-of-tune singing for this track to kinda represent how I felt about the situation, i.e., Just don't care...

I can really sing duke...But, I feel you on the feed.






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i like the second verse your voice is similar to the this is why im hot rapper and you said its sort of a look at me now track and those are actuallt lyrics in the hook i agree with meek i dont really like the singing how you did it but it isnt horrible i just really dont like soulja boy you got a crisp delivery and decent lyrics you'll be really good if you keep at you craft

Hook is aight might wanna put a female on it or re do it. Verses stood out da most 2 me tho beat is sick. Fix da hook I like da hook but it was kinda annoying after awhile. Dope drop tho both verse were on point.

HKX wrote:Hook is aight might wanna put a female on it or re do it. Verses stood out da most 2 me tho beat is sick. Fix da hook I like da hook but it was kinda annoying after awhile. Dope drop tho both verse were on point.

i agree man..... verses were tight as hell man.... but ummm.... get a male R&B singer on that hook and your ad libs when ur singin.... and u'll be good to go bro... other wise good track...