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Re: Theives In The Night
Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 11:13 am
by M33Kish
Errytime you drop, you kick knowledge in the face with your rhyme schemes. This shit was dope as fuck, the ending was deep too, actually the whole damn thing was. Keep em commin.
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Re: Theives In The Night
Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 11:58 am
by Kau the Lion
Damn, I don't know how this is getting slept on. Flow was perfect. Never fell off, even once. Multies were great. As usual, you had some tight wordplay; especially the closing line. Nothing to criticize in this drop at all. It's a touching piece as well. You really brought some knowledge with this piece that should really provoke some thought.
No rationale, innocent bodies dragged into their graves
& yes I had a few spirits, so excuse me for dancing in the rain
I could really quote the whole thing but this line stood out to me above the rest.
Re: Theives In The Night
Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 2:48 am
by Defiance
impeccable man, purely.. im not gonna play it like a fiddle, but flow was on.. content was good.. had emotion, vocab everything you'd want. but there were some inconsistancies here and there. but just superficial shit.. good shit.. keep on ghosting man