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-- Sat May 28, 2011 11:25 am --

ya raps get dissolved. i guess his should evolve. how he the splashking but no dates are revolved!
his raps are briddle screams. he's just a riddled teen cuz im on top of splash mountain with no resort's of disney theme's!
we dont need heads to clash. cuz if his dick wasn't squirting hash .we'd be facing his better half!
he still hoping for rapture's, provoking these bastards. yet eloping with crackers just like the splash you make. left broken in fracures!

exspo's:
splash=seamen, dates
splash mountain in disney
splash=seamen, organisms broken to fractures

Ok B really loves talkin about bein on guys mountains,thats some fag shit
B loves fat-dicks,fuck swag-kid,B got his name from gucci mane's main ad-lib


I Murk jaws,while i murder this spongebob faggit,Ill annihilate your-Stars,
Ima Murcileago vs HondaAccord if were cars,I left B's Moms body more stretched out than Buer's Bars



You couldnt leave Gooses-Shook,im not talking music when i tell Buer i got the Newest-Hooks
Get the hell off my time,you couldnt rhyme reading Dr.Suess's-Books


You a nerd who really isnt with his words,it occurs youve been served
Such A bummmer,my rhymes hotter than the sun in the summer,so im sure to eliminate any Buers
(BURR!)

ya raps get dissolved. i guess his should evolve.
how he the splashking but no dates are revolved!
a little to complex, wordplay is there none-the-less *Dont take complex as bad thing, just makes the reader a bit to much til u see explanation when your done. punchline slightly hits
his raps are briddle screams. he's just a riddled teen
cuz im on top of splash mountain with no resort's of disney theme's!
haha this was cool
we dont need heads to clash. cuz if his dick wasn't squirting hash
.we'd be facing his better half!
Cool wordplay, nice flip - ok punch
he still hoping for rapture's, provoking these bastards.
yet eloping with crackers just like the splash you make. left broken in fracures!
ehh - wordplay there but weak punch/closer

overall you hade some good wordplay - i would like to see hard hitting punches and more personals but other than that not bad

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Ok B really loves talkin about bein on guys mountains,thats some fag shit
B loves fat-dicks,fuck swag-kid,B got his name from gucci mane's main ad-lib
cool wordplay - ok punch (Burrrr) haha -- ok opener
I Murk jaws,while i murder this spongebob faggit,Ill annihilate your-Stars,
Ima Murcileago vs HondaAccord if were cars,I left B's Moms body more stretched out than Buer's Bars
bit stretched, not feeling the punch - more towards his mom than opponent
You couldnt leave Gooses-Shook,im not talking music when i tell Buer i got the Newest-Hooks
Get the hell off my time,you couldnt rhyme reading Dr.Suess's-Books
bunch of threats, til the ending part - still not a very strong punch
You a nerd who really isnt with his words,it occurs youve been served
Such A bummmer,my rhymes hotter than the sun in the summer,so im sure to eliminate any Buers
(BURR!)
cool nameplay -- alright closer

overall u opened and closed ok - but in between didnt see nothing, i would also like to see more personals like i told your opponent, but more creativity, and wordplay would be cool to see also.


Both structures had on&off flows
But since both had 2 bars I liked I have to give to Buer just for more consistency as he also had an ehh ok line.
good match up.. close battle
V=Buer

-- Tue May 31, 2011 10:01 pm --

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Nice battle,
i'mma give the flow cat to Buer his was just a more fluent read in my opinion, multies go to buer too there was a better use of them, i felt splash's punches hit harderlol @ 2nd n 3rd bar, punch and enjoyment cat goes to splash. Neither really had any personals but Buer had more nameplay attacks, it's very close I liked splash's verse but for me Buer edged it. You need to hit harder with punches though.

MVGT: Burr

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mygt burr bcoz he has good battle verse and he uses good multies his second and third bar is a good punchlines

imo, Wiz's vote shouldn't count because it's not thoroughly explained.

Punchlines: Buer
Nameplay: Tie
Flow: Tie..
Rhymescheme: Buer
Personals: Tie

vote: Buer

expo: Buer,took this in my opinion. loved his complexity and scheme. King, shorten the lines and try not to get too fancy i could tell which punches were forced, because of weak word choice.

I would have to go for splash..he seemed to cover the criteria better..he had better structure but ok personals and punches..if bauer had put more bars up he would have been ok...so because he had more overall...
MVGT:"SPLASH